Reviews for First Kiss
pokeshipping111 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
It was soo cute n sweet..damn Gary for disturbing them..why didn't ash just lock the door :D
Mrs. Nose chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
That was super cute, I loved it!
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
Nice story
riorio chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
Small n simple. To make a long review short,Great!
LeChick chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Oh you gotta love Gary xD
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Great work!..keep up the good work !
I have never seen a UFO chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
I was laughing so hard at the end when Gary walked in on them.
Person chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Just had your first kiss, and who barges through the door? Gary Motherfuckin' Oak.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Great one shot here!
Wxnderland chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
This was really good xD The ending killed me btw, I died. I just love Gary
Zetsueno chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
This is possibly the best pokeshipping fluff I've read in a while. This is nice new wind in contrast to the typical angst-emotional fics, which unfortunately dominate the better part of pokeshipping archive. i hope you'll write another chapter to this.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
you should make another chapter very sweet and adorable and cute and I would go on but you would fall asleep reading it (;
ultimateCCC chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Next time makeout upstairs.
Ready to fly chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
That was so funny XD Gary your supposed to be ash's wingman! Don't go barging in when he is with his girl! XD that was too great loved it haha