Reviews for Betrayal
Korog the Oversoul chapter 5 . 11/6
Was Naruto deprogrammed? Will Tsunade forgive Naruto?
Korog the Oversoul chapter 4 . 11/6
Who will live? Is Tayuya still alive?
Korog the Oversoul chapter 2 . 11/6
Don't spare Danzo, but what about the people who miss Naruto?
Korog the Oversoul chapter 1 . 11/6
I get Naruto being pissed, but please let him come home when he learns that Kakashi and Sakura are D-bags, also add Hinata please. Will Kurama keep Orochimaru from taking over Naruto's body?
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19
Have you seen how Tsunade really looks?
Eternal-Tundra chapter 10 . 9/10
Lol...I don't think that Naruto has a pure heart if he wants to kill most of Konoha ._.'' but okay... :5
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 8/21
yea ok i'm dropping this story you completely fucked it up by turning Gaara into a god damn female I HATE gender swap stories you really should put that in the description (or maybe you purposefully left it out to try an get more readers).
marquis.shax chapter 2 . 8/21
you totally screwed up on the geography Wave country is in the complete opposite direction of Oto as Oto is in the former Rice Country
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 8/21
sadly I could see Kakashi doing this so long as he could still suck Sasuke's tiny little cock every day or at least give him a hand job lol
wolfbane chapter 6 . 8/5
i am sorry to say but you have a big mother F ing plot whole with your shion protection mission and it is that since they know naruto has the legendary rinnegan they would never send naruto on any form of a suduction mission were the suduction target lives. this is so because no one will want to risk even a remote chance of this legendary power falling into someone else's will get this power. and since they know it is a bloodline and those tend to be passed on from parent to offspring. so in sending naruto they risked the chance of shion getting pregnant with a rinnegan user baby and with it they risk losing the massive advantage of being the sole village to have the most powerful bloodline in known existence. and no matter how liberal they are or how important the alliance they would not risk it when they could use someone else or even a different approach all together.
Bombertank chapter 10 . 6/29
you do know that yagura was killed some time before or during the chunin exam
Bombertank chapter 4 . 6/28
Nice going in making Shion a bad guy in this story. Even though she is not in cannon.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/31
Write more soon plz and fuck that person below me there a terrible person who should burn in hell for that comment
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27
i hope you get raped, tortured and killed you fucking waste of space . worthless shits like you are a glorified cumdump
Guest chapter 13 . 4/25
Well this is getting interesting so keep up the good work and update soon looking forward to the next chapter.
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