Reviews for The Storm
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
Holy Moly, that was so flippin' crazy! Great read though!
Paliia Love chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
I fell off my chair reading this fic. REALLY, REALLY GOOD. Well deserved that first place! :)
sparklymeg chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Well. I had heard about this but didn't have the guts to read it. I'm glad I finally did. It was amazing! Good job!
LayAtHomeMom chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Tinsley doll! You had me going pure cray. As I was reading I was all "Oh no, I can't do cheaterwards. Is he cheating? Is this a d-bag Edward?" And as the story went on I was like "Tanya must have something to do with this. Evil, evil, evil." And then with the not getting pregnant - true facts - when I was trying to get pregnant with my first - I was so fixated on it I swear I lost my mind. Mr. Lay told me to stop reading books with the terms "unfriendly uterus" in them. I am pretty sure I was cuckoo for cocoa puffs so her behavior/disappointment about the baby was totally in line. FANTASTIC one shot - I did not see that coming AT ALL! Great job!
mustlovertp chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
WOW!

Omg. It was BELLA who when medieval on Edward! That was fantastic. Such a build up and only just towards the end did I start to think that the problem was more her than him. Nicely done! xoxoxo
Quinn chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Holy God, Tinsley. What an epic story. I'm completely flattened by it. Your creativity is endless. The angst was exceptional, and so was the sex.
So proud of you! Congratulations on first place! You deserved it!
MrsK81 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Omg you totally had me convinced Edward was dragging her all over the country because he was some deranged killer on the run lol I loved the twist and the story was fabulous! Great great great!
Jonesn chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Here's my sneaky, guest review.. ;)
Omg the feels were all over the place with this. Edward's the robber, and OMG he's cheating, but wait a minute, no, something is up with Bella and he's protecting her! I figured there were some mental issues somewhere about midway through. But did not see what she actually did coming. I literally gasped and clutched at my chest when she realized what she had done. I felt sick ... but in a good way :D
Good luck!
Congratulations on the win, Tins! You deserved it!
-j
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Wow that was definitely dark and twisted I can see why you won. Poor Alice and Tanya getting dragged into this. Is it wrong that I still think Edward is behind it all? just writing up the journal to blame bella? Breaking in to alices house before she hit him with a shovel? its keeping me guessing
twilly chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Oh my goodness Tinsley! I sort of had a feeling Edward was innocent and that it was a perception issue that made her think it was him. And then I though maybe it was Alice and Tanya screwing with her mind. Then I started think maybe it was. I never though Bella would kill Edward!
twilightladies chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
*sigh* Second time around this still breaks my heart!
But, it is a fabulous story & you should be extremely proud of it! This was an original idea & you done so well with it! I absolutely loved it! And did not see the ending coming - what a twist!
Great entry & im honoured you asked for my help! Cannot wait for more of your work!
xox
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
What a freaking twist!

Loved it :)
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
I am stubborned, it's still fantastic.
debslmac chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
loved this story
Ali OMalley Cat chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Loved, didn't think Bella was gonna turn out to be the crazy one.
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