Reviews for The Rapier: A Fine Tension
Southern Lakelady chapter 4 . 2/25/2023
It’s been forever since this story was first posted. I found it relatively early on in my SS/HG fad. And loved it! I took a fencing class myself in college & experienced it so much the same as Hermione did—loved the strength, grace, fluidity, formality & passion of it; & feeling yourself getting stronger, faster, better the more you train.

I like the silent bonding that has been going on bwtn Hermione & Snape: Hermione wants him to notice she’s becoming a woman. And then later when he comes for her.

**Spoiler Alert**—Nice ambiguity at the end. I like to read Snape’s last line(s) as him just comforting her. But, as the spy, he would have known of the planned attack on her family. Was it more than just foreknowledge? Have they just been 2 relentless perfectionists enjoying training together? Or has he been deliberately honing her into a weapon against the dark side?
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 4 . 1/7/2022
Haha I'd like to .try to kill me..days Hermione in her anguish.
FoxFireAngels chapter 4 . 8/6/2021
I enjoyed reading this! It's interesting that Snape and Hermione both enjoy fencing, but I can't blame them. I did not see the ending coming, and I loved where this chapter ended. How you wrote Hermione's despair was just beautiful and heartbreaking! I loved reading this! Thank you for writing this!
monay9e chapter 4 . 1/16/2021
Ooooooo! Please finish this story!
mariesnape chapter 4 . 10/2/2020
If there is more please finish
LiLxPiNk chapter 4 . 6/19/2019
Short, but very good. Wish there were a few more chapters-at least. Such an interesting, though heart rending, premise.
DarkAphrodite chapter 4 . 5/7/2019
Amazing
written-by-moonlight chapter 4 . 8/20/2018
Wow. This was amazing! I hope you write more one day, because I would LOVE to read more!
AuntieL chapter 4 . 8/15/2018
I love that he's so supportive of her.
AuntieL chapter 3 . 8/15/2018
Oh dear!
AuntieL chapter 2 . 8/15/2018
"Two-legged dalmatian" had me laughing out loud!

Interesting scenes between Severus and Hermione.
AuntieL chapter 1 . 8/15/2018
Oh, I LOVE THIS ALREADY! I'm loving this considerate Snape!
littleladyangel chapter 4 . 6/18/2018
This was a lovely story although not enough chapters! I loved their relationship grown from a shared passion :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11/2017
I am still amazed every time I find this story. Its authentic, natural, raw feeling it's amazing. I wish to see so much more from this point of view.
SaiyaCat chapter 4 . 3/28/2017
Wow
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