Ugh, I love Will and Alice so much. This hurts.

You should write more his was really good!

Wll is so lovable so is knalice
I love this story

I liked that. Man, I thought I was the only one who knows Knave and Alice to be perfect for each other!
Beautiful. Really. I like your portrayal of both characters, the words are very much fitting.
It could have used some editing though. At times, the rhythm is off and even though you have a nice style, that slows it down and that's really a shame. Do you have an editor? Might help.
Also, I thought it was a little to kitschy towards the end. But then again, that's personal opinion.

Love this! Short, but so powerful :-)

Loved it

This is BEAUTIFUL! *U* I love this so much! It's PERFECT! *U* Rock on! So sad, but so GORGEOUS! Will's feelings for her come through here like a tidal wave, and it's MINDBLOWING! *U*

This is so beautiful, I adore it _

I love it!