|Reviews for A Lewd New World|
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/17
I smell bamboo...
| Starburn chapter 14 . 10/12
I usually HATE futanari stuff, but your fic is good enough that I can tolerate it. Keep up the good work!
| Starburn chapter 13 . 10/12
Still doing great. Why is the title in Japanese? Please tell me if my reviews don't tell you what chapter they are for; first time reviewing on this site.
| Starburn chapter 12 . 10/12
I completely agree. That guy is an asshole.
| Deiru Tamashi chapter 60 . 10/2
Another reviewer phrased it best. I came for the porn, and stayed for the plot. You manage to blend both together in a surprisingly effective as well as unpredictable way that generates both hotness and interestingness. Reading all sixty of the chapters has made it official for me. This is THE best lemon fic on site and possibly ever. I love this, it's sequel and spin-offs, and all else. Great work.
| theshyguy34 chapter 2 . 9/24
Naruto doesn't drop the mic... he drops his trousers
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13
Ehhh would've been better if it was just females. The gender bent thing is freaking creepy especially considering that was originally his dad. Ugh skipped most of this chapter, hoping to see some with just fems.
You should put the pairing of the chapter and the start of it
| Alvor the Warhawk chapter 1 . 9/15
I laughed so incredibly hard. Well done.
| Raptorshinobi213 chapter 1 . 9/7
best naruto harem story ever?
| Mario.R.E chapter 28 . 9/5
| tylermech66 chapter 23 . 9/2
dude, boner down, sadness up... goddamnit my mood is gone!
| Ghost2656 chapter 12 . 8/22
That piece of shit can't write even if he was being threatened. He the worst of the worst. All those ass poundings his father gave him must've messed up his head.
| Percx chapter 12 . 8/17
Damn chapter 12
| Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 27 . 8/14
... guro and vore are two of the very FEW porn genre's i DO NOT do it for me, so i wont be reading THAT particular fic anytime soon... as in never.
Guro, Vore, NTR... well the extreme variety at any rate. scat, watersports, most varieties of horror with a few exceptions, the more extreme examples of Mind Break, Cheating and rape in fic format, in hentai and doujinshi that's a different matter. also yaoi, i have nothing against gay men, some of my best friends are FLAMING, but i myself am a straight male.
other than that, and maybe a couple others that i cant think of off the top of my head, i'm pretty open to damn near anything. i'll read about BDSM and such, but i'd never try it in reality, and i DEFINITELY will never take a dildo or Strap-on up the rear. i'm no one's subbie bitch.
so, i am enjoying THIS fic, but because VORE is one genre i cant get into EVER, i wont be even GLANCING at the other fic you have going on AFF... though i do have a suggestion.
you mentioned that if this fic ever got flagged and removed that you'd post it on AFF. might i suggest instead posting it on a site called Ficwad? it allows ALL manner of fic on there, and even has an MA rating for adult fics. also the interface is a lot more user friendly then the one on AFF. honestly AFF has a pretty crappy setup, its confusing as hell, and damn near impossible to work the search function without having a bachelors degree in computer coding.
so yeah, i'd recommend Ficwad over AFF ANY day of the week.
| Aizen chapter 58 . 8/3
Pleeeaaaase keep writing these. I absolutely LOVE reading these. The fighting scenes are intense.