|Reviews for Her Majesty's Secret Service|
| Harriverse chapter 33 . 11/5/2015
How sweet! Just positively perfect. Please tell me they get preggers!
| Harriverse chapter 32 . 11/5/2015
Lol! Just what do you think your dad would say?. Sorry for your loss.
| Harriverse chapter 28 . 11/4/2015
I'm not so totally a fan of omega-verse fics, but this is a nice bit of sexy fun. Fortunately you include plenty of disclaimers to reinforce that this is only for escapism and fun. And lord knows you need all of that that you can get in your life. So nice that you are willing to share such wicked fantasy with the rest of us!
| NeNa chapter 33 . 4/28/2015
Hola en primer lugar quiero disculpame por no saber escribir en inglés pero si puedes leer esto quiero decirte que tu fic es grandioso me ha encantado de verdad. de antemano te felicitó y de verdad espero con ancias la continuación. Bueno también quisiera ver si está la posibilidad de que John si se pueda quedar embarazado así pudiera existir Haimish una combinación perfecta de ellos 2 y pues siempre he querido ver (leer o imaginar) a John con una gran panza y con antojos cambios de humor y todo lo que conlleva un embarazo y Sherlock cuidando de el como el Alfa que es ... pero si no se puede aún espero con emoción esta gran continuación de acuerdo!
bueno gracias por este fic y nos leeremos próximamente.
Espero más fics de está pareja por tu parte y todos sus encuentros amorosos! !
| Astrido chapter 33 . 12/18/2014
wow. really love your story.
the john omega part is really different from the other stories, but i like it.
is this the end, or will there be more chapters coming?
| whiteberry chapter 33 . 11/19/2014
I'm at loss of words now. Truthfully speaking, I was slightly annoyed by the idea of unit Omega although I think of it as creative. That's because I grew up surrounded by quite strict traditional eastern culture. But given to the situation John was in, his kind nature and long hard days for the army...John's choice is to be understood. No objective in your idea. Really. It's truly creative and original but I felt like explaining myself. Sorry for the long rambling.
Another point is that you made sure to create and explain every detail that built the characters' past. You carefully told abouth their feelings and wishes, going deep to explore their feelings. I pitied Sherlock for his fifteen years of celibate life because of Mycroft and quite dislike the elder Holmes although his reason is strong enough. But the development of this story is good. The acceptance between Sherlock and John, their struggles to overcome any obstacles...is rich with emotions. Anyway, you manage to keep the pace from becoming slow.
I really enjoy reading your stories. This is definitely my new top shelf story. Keep up the good work.
Sorry for the long review. Have a nice day, Butterscotch.
| seanaface chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
The service omega idea was really top shelf! Thank you for the fun story. So sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing with us.
| Petrichor503 chapter 33 . 9/12/2014
This story has been utterly beautiful, it has had my stomach in butterflies and it's just wow! Reading your authors notes at the end have been insightful to what you have been going through and I think you are one strong, brave and inspirational person and to have carried on writing...you are stronger than I ever will be and I completely admire you. The story is genius and I love omegaverse so much and the thought of Sherlock not being able to help John killed me inside. I cannot wait until the next chapter, I will wait in anticipation. Xx
| Shadowfire RavenPheonix chapter 33 . 9/12/2014
I'm not usually one for mushy but you do it very well!
| Guest chapter 33 . 9/12/2014
Great hope u update soon can't wait for the bonding
| Raeya chapter 33 . 9/11/2014
Great Chapter. Glad John told him and that Sherlock stood by him. That collar is great.
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 33 . 9/11/2014
I like it a lot! **
| Black-Luna chapter 32 . 9/6/2014
RIP Lt. D.J.T. I hope you are holding up well. Great chapter. Update soon!
| Argos chapter 32 . 9/5/2014
My heartfelt condolences dearheart...
| Raeya chapter 32 . 9/5/2014
Thanks for this update. It is a great chapter.
So sorry to hear about your father. My condolences for your loss.