Reviews for Kurama in Pajamas
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2016
*coos and giggles*
That was fun and adorable. I hope they handled whatever mission Kurama was sick for before going over to visit, as implied. I like guard-duty Hiei. Also, I highly doubt Hiei has a cell phone. How was he supposed to check/call in? He wasn't going to leave the Fox unprotected while he was so vulnerable. Silly boys. XD I guess Shiori feels a little better now; Shuuichi may not have a girlfriend or even a hint of one, but he does have friends who do normal things like roping him into playing videogames. Sometimes. XD
SunBinamra chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
This was adorable! And the image of a sleepy Kurama is too cute!

Well done!
Airin Desu chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
Love this. It's adorable. It's something that could easily fit into canon. Great job!
don'tgivea chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
haha! loooove this!
stichedupsoul chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
This was the best thing ever
Animekitty47 chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
This was a cute lil fic!
Don't feel bad about Kurama being slightly OoC, he had an excuse, unlike the others. ;)
I love how you did Shiori. Bouncing between serious and jokes doesn't fit the (disappointingly) little we've seen of her, but you did such a good job with it!
Of course, Yusuke was a little OoC too. Yusuke, reminding Kuwabara about Suichi's name? Yusuke being *tactful*? XD
And I love the way Kurama apparently registers all of them as 'friends- ignore' regardless of how *much* noise they make. XD And everyone promptly forgets about the hole Yusuke apparently made in Kurama's wall. XD
Anyway, great job with this cute lil fic! :D
Mikageshi chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Hi, SSA Javier Grey P.I!

The YYH fandom needs more fanfics like this.

I found the ending quite sweet and endearing - especially because I myself am currently caring for an unwell loved one these days. Call me a hypocrite (since, as you already know, I pair Kurama with someone in my own fanfics), but I actually DON'T share Shiori's... eagerness... to find Kurama a "girlfriend" in this fic. In my opinion, HE DOESN'T NEED ONE. He already has - as you yourself said by the end of this fic - "people who love him": in the form of Hiei, Yusuke, and Kuwabara.

And speaking of Shiori... Your portrayal of her was a breath of fresh air to me - a welcome change from the meek-gentle-and-kind-to-the-point-of-being-a-doormat depiction of Shiori that I've grown accustomed to over the years. At first read, my eyes widened in stunned disbelief upon reading of Shiori telling her son: "I'm saying BE A TEENAGER" and then commanding him to "Drink" in the very next sentence - for a split second there, I thought she was bluntly, blatantly encouraging him to engage in the vice of drinking ALCOHOL! XD

i also enjoyed your sense of humor here. All in all, it made your fic a light-hearted read. Granted, all of the characters uttered lines that I would never have imagined they would - not only did Yusuke and Kuwabara seem to have turned into temporary geniuses upon reaching the Minamino doorstep; you also ACTUALLY got Hiei to say the word "ma'am" in here! XD Yet this is the kind of YYH fic that transcends characterization - given the in-universe unlikeliness of its entire premise (Kurama getting sick) in the first place, its readers are bound to behold the YYH characters behaving in ways that they never have in canon.

Kudos to you for pulling it off.

P.S. By the way... Some of the things that you wrote in here seem oddly... familiar. XD Especially the "speed at which human fingernails grow" tidbit. It kind of rings a bell. XDD

P.P.S. If I'm not mistaken, I believe Kurama said that line to Hiei in the second to the last episode of YYH, Episode 111 (originally entitled "Concluded! The End of the Conflict" in the original Japanese dub, but retitled "Closure" by FUNimation in the U.S.), as his joking way of refusing to do Hiei the favor of returning Yukina's hiruiseki jewel to her, since he wanted Hiei to do so himself. Am I right? -
LazyHaru chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Haha,u should really right a second chapter of this!
Nagito's Waifu chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
I love this to death
skytigeress chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
I love the way you write this story it's very cute :)
PiNkBuN17 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I don't think this is out of character, considering the situation, I LOVED THIS! Very cute, and oddly enough it was simple to imagine in my mind. I noticed this little story is mainly consistent with speech moving the plot along, and I think that is cool. :)
spoiled princez chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Haha, this is really cute. ;) I love the light humor, and how you describe Kurama. Yeah, he must really look sooooo cute in pajamas, sleeping so peacefully. Hiei and Kurama are both quite OOC, but it's alright because it fit the overall story. Haha. Great job. I also like Shiori being overprotective contrastibg with her desire to get Kurama to "get a life". Haha. Really nice story. Too bad I don't know the answer. xD