Reviews for Let it Burn by Mina Rivera
LaPumuckl chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
What a sweet olderward;)
Eeyorefan12 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Olderwards are hot. Nice use of flashback in this story. Just one little tease: I'm surprised Bella can't swim if she has a pool. (Not a biggie, just a passing thought to prove I was reading closely!) Anyway, a fun and entertaining read. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Great entry, looking forward to see if it's expanded.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Mmm... Schmexy!
Riv3rBoy84 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Interesting one-shot, it has the potential for it to be continued. Well done.
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Mmmmmm...olderward :) Thanks for sharing.
BarbyBells chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Ailee H chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Love this!
amandac3 chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Ooooh! Love an Older Edward. This was sweet and sexy. Good luck. :)
Tinsley Warren chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Aw that ending!

What a steamy read! Glad he gave in!

Great entry!
Writing4Roses chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Great one-shot... I really enjoyed the back & forth with the flashbacks. It gave you a little more understanding of the characters.
Karen Cullen Grey chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
cute story...good luck!
crackupmonkey chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
That was amazing!
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
My favorite part: "She slapped me, sobbing loudly. "Why can't you love me?!"
"I already do!" I yelled, her face between my hands, forcing her to look at me.
She froze in my arms, her eyes wide at my admission.
"I already do . . ." I whispered, before I crashed my lips against hers."

That really got me... I really enjoyed this one, and there are all kinds of possibilities for expansion. Please do!
krzpepper chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Very sexy and swoony! Loved it!
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