Reviews for A Promise Kept (An Alternate Ending To Allegiant)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20
Sophiatran710qq chapter 1 . 6/30
It's so similar to Veronica Roth's writing style! Good job, such a great story! 3
Dulce129 chapter 1 . 3/11
Much better ending!

Take note movie makers. Lol
Naruisawesome chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Yup! This is how it should've been!
Kimberly chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
love it thanks
Allweneedishope chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
U should make it into a story
David chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
I loved your version so much better!
TheHotMess chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Definitely a better ending imo! Well done :)
enj412 chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
I loved this. Amazing writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
So happy that I cried! :)
taylor nycum chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
absolutely amazing i cant tell u how impressive that was i mean when tris died in the real version i was devastated and threw the book and i read it over and over till i just broke down and when i read this i felt like a happy ray or sun shine and as u said i dont think any one could let tris die but now u well thanks!
nerdfighter99999 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Yes this scratches my itch perfectly
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Whoever wrote THIS!... Thank u!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
I am begging u to keep weighting that was amazing! U really need to wright about their lives after, please please please don't stop!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Great ending! I loved it! You should add on I would love to read more!
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