Reviews for Overprotective Obsession |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue the story its awesome! |
![]() ![]() You say you don’t bash, yet you villainize the nameless villagers. You make it impossible for the reader to be able to relate with or sympathize the villagers when they are being assholes at best and monsters at worst. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please make more of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Twin Phantoms |
![]() ![]() Wish there was more tbh |
![]() ![]() ![]() This should be banned…. Child porn?really? The fact that you wrote child porn and thought, “this seems like a good story” this sum up shit |
![]() ![]() Messed up shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() How the fuxk can your hands change into claws nigga that fuxking paws |
![]() ![]() ![]() How the hell does man bust twice in thirty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are stupid Naruto became a genin at 12 |
![]() ![]() ![]() How the hell does man bust twice in thirty |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't imagine naruto with red hair |
![]() ![]() I’m legit dying of laughter |