Reviews for Overprotective Obsession
ElementalMaster16 chapter 8 . 7/29
pretty interesting fic!
BartWLewis chapter 8 . 7/17
Awesome. Can't wait for more.
Dick chapter 8 . 4/26
brady chapter 6 . 4/5
You keep mixing up names such as using naruto when you mean naruko
D chapter 8 . 3/1
Not bad story for a lemon incest style. good story line though i think the lemon scenes were a little too redundant. anyway nice job.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/7
I want to be Naruto
*Perverted grin*
Marato Eto chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
Okay! I am done with this shit. It is utterly terrible! Its an amazing idea, but horribly executed. first of all the ages. they start a four, than a year skip, five, then a three year skip. eight. but somehow they turned into ten year olds. on top of that. you said five months in till venom exams. well venom exams start at 12. now into the sex. personally I love lemons. I think they are great, but only if they are later in the story,as a way to bring a closer bond between two characters. but you rush it so greatly that its in the second chapter. on top of that, a ten year old- which is actually eight- cannot even think about getting a erection, and a female would feel nothing during sex. its idiotic and annoying. also. if Minato ever had twins the demon would have been split between them. Why did he put half in himself? Because there were no other options. so now that I have pointed all the flaws out in your story, let me tell you the pro's. a good idea. That's it. this entire story is so poorly executed that there is nothing besides a good idea. if this story ever gets COMPLETELY rewritten. I will return. but other than that its terrible. good luck on your next attempt I hope you can get it right next time, I honestly like the idea.
Leaprechaun1 chapter 8 . 12/2/2015
Are you going to be continuing this story or is it abandoned?
Skorno chapter 8 . 11/17/2015
LOL, I Love the ending, Kushina may have killed a few people LOL
Devilsummoner666 chapter 8 . 10/7/2015
Is this abandoned? It's really good...odd...but good ya know? ...nice job on the lemons
Guest chapter 8 . 8/8/2015
Your late by 1 year and 3 months by next week from tomorrow, kakashi. (The name is for a joke)
johnny chapter 8 . 6/25/2015
nice chapter and hope you get the next chapter out soon i think this fanfic can realy go somewhere
Narctia chapter 8 . 5/30/2015
well ım out of words this ff is awesome after 5th chapter ım suspect you might be my loss twin because ıncest,lemons,limes,futanari,threesome,orgy,toys,twintails, these are the things that ı love verrryyyyyyy much can we get aultra lemon that contains gangbang,yuri(henge no jutsu),futanari alot of it and maybe just maybe little bit of naruko using toys/dominating naruto ı have a bit of a masochist nature ı know its weird but my manhodd becomes alerted when ı came across somethin like that loved the omakes too specialy the first one ı lughed my ass off to moon after hearin'' she was pregnant''phrase and that gave me a ıdea for a ff basicly its all of the bijuus living in a house (dont care its a au or canon) its full of humor and LEMONS the story goes around kyubi one day he comes back with matatabi/nibi pregnant and humor breaks lose how is it ı wont write it because ı have writing skills that would make any wri,ter shoot himself
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4/2015
silgain chapter 8 . 4/17/2015
good story, keep going !
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