|Reviews for Naruto's Keyblade Journey|
| marshal lee 1091 chapter 4 . 2/9
Fem garra but not fem sasuke
| zachary12 chapter 4 . 2/2
| zero chapter 4 . 1/28
Can you add team rwby from the rwby anime
| adngo714 chapter 4 . 1/29
I dislike Harems and gender changes without a reason. But since I like x-over fics with Naruto, I'll keep reading.
| The Crimson Fucker chapter 4 . 1/28
I say have Ventress jst help Naruto train and stuff, and I wouldn't mind there being a Female Sasuke and Gaara, but only if you change their names into something more feminine.
| seeker of true anime fan fic chapter 4 . 1/28
K in order yes for tge hearm same to tge fem sasuke and gaara not sure on the last one hooe for more though seeker has spojen
| CatLoverx33 chapter 4 . 1/28
I think Ventress should help with training and give Kiba Gaomon since it's the closes to a dog
| gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 1/28
that was excellent work and as for you questions
1. I don't think so
3. depends on the next world
| gunruner420 chapter 3 . 1/17
you shoud send them the world of pokemon and make like the way lion king world and make Naruto a lukcario and kuybi a nine tails
| Stranger Glass chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Alright not bad though there is one mistake. The mistake you made is spelling the Seeker of Darknesses name wrong, it's spelled 'A-N-S-E-M'. Plus, the're fanfictions that have what some of your reviewers said. Two fanfictions I read were Naruto and Bleach Crossovers where Grimmjow was a sexy Female. Another fanfiction i read is were Rouge and Blaze were transformed into humans. Last Fanfiction I read was a Crossover between Naruto and My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic where the entire Mane 6 and their other friends were human. Though you should have more confidence in your stories, just like Cornelius Robinson's motto from Disney's Meet the Robinsons, "Keep Moving Forward".
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
here's an idea for a digivice the power code typer this little gadget has the ability to unleash all sort of effects when the right series of code are typed into it which range from tool to assist our hero's, digivoling to boosting certain attributes like speed, power and endurance for brief periods. but here's special feature to consider the merge and copy codes the merge code involves our hero's merging with their respective partner and this doesn't cause any changes in their partners appearance but it does grant them incredible power whilst the copy code turns our hero's into their Digimon partner for a double trouble tag team. but the only draw back for using the merge and copy codes is that they can use any other code whilst either of those codes are active other than the cancel code to deactivate those particular codes. and one other draw back for the power codes is that they can't be used consectively and have to go through something of cool down period before another set of code can be used also if they get the code sequence wrong what comes out as a result can be a pathectic joke.
| adngo714 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
I hate massive harems. I prefer NaruHina. This fanfiction was two blocks of text. Please put a new paragraph whenever someone else is talking.
| gamelover41592 chapter 3 . 11/13/2013
that was good but a little short
| KuramaFTW chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
ok im only saying this all as constructive criticism. First break up the paragraphs, its easy to lose your place reading huge paragraphs like those. Second, while it wasn't the worst I've seen always make sure to double or even triple check your grammar and spelling. Too many of those mistakes makes it painful to read and sometimes hard to understand. Finally, while not overly opposed to the idea of you making this a harem story and involving a relationship between Naruto and a Female Kyuubi, the way you just did that could've been done a lot better. First of all Naruto is 7, how can he be in love with someone at that age. No 7 year old understands the concept of love at that age except parental love. But love as in romantic feelings is never in their minds, if you had him experience those feelings at the age of 13 then that's fine. Also, even though Naruto is 7 and for the most part still very innocent and forgiving. He should still be kinda upset for his situation when meeting the reason for all of his suffering, even though neither party had a say in the matter. To sum it up, space out your paragraphs and keep them as short as possible to make it easier to read, check spelling and grammar, and finally don't rush through the relationships and keep the relationships appropriate to the age group, children should do what children do, teens do what teens do and adults do what adults do. These are things you need to keep in mind, and understand I'm only saying this to help you.
| SPark681 chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
Well nice story though your spelling needs a little work, but I don't doubt that you'll get that sorted out as your progress in your story. Overall looking forward to more from this story so keep up the great work!