Reviews for I Could Be Again
GuesssWho chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
You know who else is likely to be Q? The genie from Disney's version of Aladdin.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Yeah, I've been doing the discord-is-so-obviously-q-and-hasbro-is-deliberately-being-meta since I overheard his voice on an episode of my little pony my 12 year old was watching, and ran into the room. They didn't even TRY to distinguish discord from q; they should have just called him q and be done with it (legalities, and yet they get away with 'Dr. Whooves'.) Interesting premise; I will have to read your other, longer story in this crossover.
Deritine chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
I think your strike-throughs got taken away, though I did note at least one instance where it was obvious there was supposed to be one (I think it was 'torture/ visit ponies' or something like that).

Do like the sudden shift... I think it might be a bit better if you had a paragraph of the reliving? It didn't seem as immediate as I think you wanted it to since he was just describing that it was immediate without there being description of the feelings, etc.

Love it!