| Reviews for Inoue Shiori |
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   toffz chapter 11 . 9/9 i want him to fall in my lap too |
| toffz chapter 75 . 9/9 also i would recommend this to everyone! i always reread this when i have time |
| toffz chapter 75 . 9/9 hi, thanks for writing this fanfic! it was such a good and wholesome read |
| T.P chapter 75 . 8/21 please continue this I love it soo much and you have great potential I'm looking for fanfiction writers and this story has proven to me that you have an excellent creative mind and i love the way you keep your readers interested i would love to see the finished product of this story if you have qualified i will contact you on this website and to all the other writers out there i would also love to see more talents i hope to work with you in the future T.P |
| O-O chapter 39 . 7/15 GET THAT MF YEAHHHHH |
| 00esoteric00 chapter 75 . 6/15 I hope you continue this one day. I would love to see more of how Shiori's presence affects things. |
| gaelicplatypus chapter 27 . 5/29 Still got a lot to go. Just wanted to say that I'm usually not one for these romance/drama/slice-of-life fics, but this one is really tugging on the heart and inspiring happiness in me. |
| kawaipotatoe chapter 1 . 5/9 i come to this story like once every couple of months ahaha one of the best oc stories on here! recommend to all |
| heavenfairy chapter 1 . 3/21 wonderful story with a solid plot. hope you continue it all is well |
| KvAT chapter 40 . 1/11 Good fight scene. Really nice to see how since he only just got the Sharingan arm he's unable to use it effectively. Hell, he couldn't even utilize Shisui's eye. |
| Zerufuke chapter 75 . 1/11 GOOD ONE - YOU COULD HAVE EXPANDED THE BUSINESS EMPIRE AND GIVEN MORE CONTENT TO TEA HOUSE FUTHER EXPANSION FOR KINGDOMBUILDING- SHIORI DOESNT SEEM TO B E THE MC ANYMORE |
| passedTense chapter 72 . 1/10 somehow the prose got less polished and more cliché as the story went on |
| KvAT chapter 6 . 1/6 A little kindness goes a long ways |
| sadesackfield chapter 75 . 12/27/2022 please update this story it one of the best I've read, and I'm dying to know what's going to happen next |
| foxxxduo chapter 24 . 12/25/2022 don’t get me wrong I’m in love with the story! But I’m in chapter 25 and I feel like nothing is really happening. yes I know they are in love. And it’s adorable but a lot of the time at this part of the story there is something that happens. Some type of Antagonist usually enters or. I don’t know. just something! I love it! But I feel like it’s the same thing each chapter now. Otherwise Great story! |