Reviews for Inoue Shiori
kenegi chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
So I was right about her name, BTW you know the high windows idea for the tea shop? I don't think its a good idea because it makes it ideal for enemy nin to just drop a poison smoke bomb and then the only way out are the doors unless they run up the wall for the windows or bust a hole in the wall.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
I totally saw that coming! Except for the clan compound.
treavellergirl chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
Those relatives seem to live in their own world of their own... They live in the same village but seem to ignore that they have family they should at least keep in contact with...
fate's mask chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
i really like this story i am also curious who the love interest is going to be
kenegi chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
Oh I see... Is she going to adopt Inoue's name? well I'm looking forward to this considering that most SI fic turned out to be ninjas and yours is a civi.
kenegi chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
Inoue Shiori... Is that her full name? Because I'm getting confused since that lady's name is also Inoue... Yea...
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
Nuuu! More character death! You my dear author, have killed of four people and the Uchiha clan within five chapters. How do you feel?
treavellergirl chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
So she is more or less 6 years older then the future Rookie Nine then if the math is correct.. The relationship between her and her employer that died was enjoyable to read.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
I wouldn't be able to survive without my sweets.0-0
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
I'm glad Kohana has some security...
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
Their deaths are convenient...
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Finally! An SI that's different!xD
treavellergirl chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
The thing with the tea leaves made me think of Harry Potter world and potions . It is interesting to read how she survives and goes forward in her life.
Narutomanic chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
I read many self-insert stories, but this is the best so far.
You are very good with describing everyday life.
I like it very much.
Grammatica chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
The genre says romance and I'm like dying to know the pairing now.
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