Reviews for Two Hearts Become One
Shani8 chapter 1 . 7/25
WOW... beautifully written. Thanks for a terrific read.


-Shani :)
srhittson chapter 1 . 5/1
Love the story
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21
That was beautifully written. Very good use of imagery and sensory detail. I wish I could write as well as you. I wonder if Belle became pregnant.
elliej369 chapter 1 . 4/2
this is really good. i don't like reading but this got me very interested. can you please add on to the story. please please please ! :)
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/17
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29
Have you thought about something like this, but to commemorate Adam getting his memory back?
Bella Disney chapter 1 . 1/11
Me ha gustado mucho como has tratado el tema en cuestiĆ³n
cool player12 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
i loved it so much. will there be more
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Oh my God. This was so sweet and absolutely beautiful oh wow. You captured their emotions and love for each other perfectly. And the last line made me flail around and almost cry. This was so wonderful.
ZestySweetHeart chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Daaaaaaaaawwwww! I love love loooove this! :'D
Eos Blaze 0402 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
it was good.
and you didn't destroy my innocence singlehandedly.
GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
This is literally one of the best one shots I have ever read. Sensual, but not slutty. Graphic, but beautifully written. You did a great job balancing romantic and sexual, great job!
Wondermorena chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
This was the first BatB story I decided to read and glad to have found this because it is incredibly beautiful and you made characters who I have loved all my life with absolute justice. Adam is so sweet with his concern for Belle that is does sound like how he would act after the curse was broken even he did have some tendencies to be caring during the curse. It so cute with how normal and innocent Belle and Adam would be towards each other even slightly nervous where they are not starting a different part of their life rather than going back to the way they were from before. Can totally see these two be how they are from this version and hoping they have a wonderful and perfect life together :) You are such a talented writer thank you so much for writing this
Person chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
That was fucking perf
AutumnWinter chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Damn, that was hot! I liked how Belle's love of reading hasn't always been high-brow literature ;) Excellent little one-shot!
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