Reviews for Two Hearts Become One
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Oh my God. This was so sweet and absolutely beautiful oh wow. You captured their emotions and love for each other perfectly. And the last line made me flail around and almost cry. This was so wonderful.
ZestySweetHeart chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Daaaaaaaaawwwww! I love love loooove this! :'D
Eos Blaze 0402 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
it was good.
and you didn't destroy my innocence singlehandedly.
:)
GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
This is literally one of the best one shots I have ever read. Sensual, but not slutty. Graphic, but beautifully written. You did a great job balancing romantic and sexual, great job!
Wondermorena chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
This was the first BatB story I decided to read and glad to have found this because it is incredibly beautiful and you made characters who I have loved all my life with absolute justice. Adam is so sweet with his concern for Belle that is does sound like how he would act after the curse was broken even he did have some tendencies to be caring during the curse. It so cute with how normal and innocent Belle and Adam would be towards each other even slightly nervous where they are not starting a different part of their life rather than going back to the way they were from before. Can totally see these two be how they are from this version and hoping they have a wonderful and perfect life together :) You are such a talented writer thank you so much for writing this
Person chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
That was fucking perf
AutumnWinter chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Damn, that was hot! I liked how Belle's love of reading hasn't always been high-brow literature ;) Excellent little one-shot!
WritingVikingQueen chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Absoulutely beautiful! This should have so much more attention! I want to thank you will all my heart for writing this amazing fic. You are very talented and it shows so much in this story. Loved it! xoxo -Em
Caitlyn chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
This story is so descriptive! I loved it!
aerie50 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Your story was so good! Everything flowed so nicely and the story line was so sexy and sweet at the same time. I could totally see this actually happening though I'm pretty sure Disney would not make this into a movie haha but i loved it! great job!
fiercecomplex chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Beautifully and tastefully written! I love the innocence and tenderness shared between Belle and Adam. It feels very real and has just the perfect balance of fluff and heart. My only complaint is that I wish it was longer! You did a wonderful job!
LW12 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
it was great, very sweet
KatTheElf chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
I know you said there was a lot of fluff, but I feel there was a lot of substance too. You wrote it so well that readers can feel the love they feel for each other. Despite the mature content, there is an undeniable sweetness to this story. I was nearly brought to tears by the compassion and concern Adam shows for Belle. I especially love the very end. It would be great if Adam really existed. I am glad you chose to portray Adam as being sweet and even innocent. I have read stories about him going back to his old ways or being even worse. I think he already had to have a good heart in order for Belle to so easily bring it out. That's a theme I am also exploring in my BATB story. I've been coming out of a bad case of writer's block. lol
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