|Reviews for Building a Mystery|
| mirabellec chapter 35 . 7h ago
As always, eagerly awaiting the next instalment of your wonderful story! :)
| Mt. Aether chapter 1 . 3/10
Wow! I absolutely love this story and have been an avid fan since the beginning. The depths of your character development is astounding. Evidently, this piece is one of the best Tom Riddle/ Hermione dynamics and has a voice that I fine some tomione's lacking. I cannot fine any fault other than my part in not reviewing sooner. I congratulate you in your superb writing style. I'm looking forward to the developing plot and future projects you may do :-)
Thanks for this awesome piece of fiction!
| TheNewCompanion chapter 35 . 3/8
You're writing is as amazing as always, although I must admit, I miss the old headstrong and non-manipulative Hermione :) can't wait for next chapter!
| Jazziet chapter 35 . 3/6
Wow. First off, I'm horrible at reviewing chapter by chapter and considering how outstanding this story is I simply could not be bothered to stop. This is the best story I have had the pleasure to read in a long time and it is so addictive! I love how you built the foundation of their relationship in the past and then jolted us back to the present for the implications and consequences of their unions. It is minute but I definitely see the impact that Hermione has had on Voldemort, although, he'd probably never admit it outright. It's also nice to see the changes in Hermione. All of their interactions leave me breathless and wanting more. They are really shaping up to be the King and Queen of their respective empire.
I was devastated about Nagini! lol, I cared more about her than Ron. I am definitely rooting for Voldemort in this story. The Order is really too stupid to function and it's not that you've twisted their characters into something they're not you've done the exact opposite. You've written them completely in character and done all of them equal justice. Harry and Ron are both colossal idiots. It is absolutely amazing how self-absorbed and idiotic they are.
I'm intrigued as to where everyone's true loyalty and motivations. It seems to me with that botched rescue mission that Severus is definitely not as sympathetic to the Order (and really, who can blame him?). I'm also interested as to what Lucius has done to Neville and what the Souteni potion really does and who it's for.
I simply can not wait for the next update. I am on the edge of my seat as to what could happen next. You are an exceptional writer and I really hope that when you are finished penning your own stories that you place their titles on your profile as I would be very interested to read them.
| veronica-s chapter 35 . 3/4
OH GOD OH GOD
All the Volmione parts still amaze me. The way they talk to each other, the way they behave in front of others, those little caresses that are so intimate, the way Hermione is incorporing his maneurisms, the fact that she's starting to understand him and playing by his rules to her own benefit... All the others parts with differents characters annoy me just because I'm dreading to see what's happening to them :p I know these others parts are important for the development of the story, though. I just like their interactions too much.
I haven't reviewed last chapter because I got back to college from summer break and my classes had me head over toes. At least if I'm occupied, the wait between chapters won't seem so long :D
But heeeeeey I'm sure everyone would apreciate another smut of yours! The last one was a lot of chapters ago, and our kinky little minds need another (:
So, keep going, lovely, we all adore your fic!
| MademoiselleRiddle chapter 1 . 3/3
Keep writing please! :)
| uleanblue chapter 35 . 3/2
Back off, dude-or 'hedging your bets' will very quickly become 'digging your grave.'
And Harry, you won't be getting out of the dog house anytime soon.
Really enjoyed this chapter for the interplay between the various characters, especially LV and Hermione.
| JustMakesThemDead chapter 35 . 3/2
I don't know how I passed over this story until now. I am excited to see how things unfold.
| Kou Shun'u chapter 35 . 3/2
Ahhhh I temporarily forgot about abraxas's journals. I do hope lucius finds more as it seemed to be kinda anticlimactic. If they took ron's magic away- would that have him no longer hjave further detriment? Though how would they strip him of it. Hmmmmm what's the buiness with nevielle and lucius. Did we know something from the torture he inflicted? I think we did, I can't quite recall. Hmmm I wonder what's draco's take on hg. Interesting that snape refused to reveal what he knows about hg to the order. Which given his reasoning, I don't blame him.
| Kou Shun'u chapter 34 . 3/2
Finally hermione gets to reveal somethings about her situation to severus. I like how it made snape realize how that affected events in their foward to what else she will reveal and snape's informing the order of what he knows. Wonder if hg will be able to save draco and what it means for his future.
Well I hope ron isn't dead. And riddle should know how a dead ron by his hand would not win any favor with hg.
| SpartaFidgets chapter 35 . 3/1
I absolutely adored Severus in this chapter. I suppose the benefit of exhausting himself with three different jobs is he gets to play god every once in a while - albeit in subtle, Slytherin ways. His omission with the Order was particularly enjoyable. Haha, even his exit was snarky. Very well done.
One of the things that cracked me up in this chapter was that I still felt sorry about Nagini but not for Ron. I think his complex curse was very clever and felt in character with Voldemort. The scene was left in a really intriguing place because it seems that the repercussions have a chance to be multilayered. I love that it wasn't resolved in a simple death.
As always, I think you have a flare for visuals. You definitely succeeded there in the last scene with Hermione and Voldemort. Hermione's waiting for acknowledgment and standing on her tippy toes for his standards of appearances was brilliant.
Thank you for the update! Looking forward to more!
| Mc111 chapter 35 . 3/1
Thanks for the update. Very good worth the wait as usual!
| Kate Elizabeth Black chapter 35 . 3/1
Does Voldemort in his snake-a-like self?
| Obey the Muse chapter 35 . 2/28
Hermione's definitely changed within the future chapters. She's down right slytherin-ish. She plays the consort to a tee.
Severus is quite a mystery. I'm not sure where to place him, although he's one of people I hope survives the outcome.
Harry and Draco have an interesting dynamic.
Sit down Arthur.
| Lola.Loves.Me chapter 35 . 2/28
Absolutely amazing! This story is my addiction I really can't get enough of it! You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more