Reviews for Building a Mystery
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10
Ah I was also wondering if he had yet to decipher what was written on the paper. I can’t wait to for him to uncover what is written. I have a feeling it was from future to past self but I would think that his blood would have enabled the writing to show though. I love the anticipation!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10
I enjoyed the first chapter immensely! I love the hints that Tom knows exactly who she is and why she might be there. The parchment was said to be blank which is interesting. I’m curious if it had writing on it from future to past self that indicated what she was doing there and then it disappeared after read. I’m excited to continue this journey! Bring on all the darkness and nuanced multidimensional characters!
guest reviewer chapter 32 . 6/3
harry being a homophobe is crazy
MizzOzz41 chapter 49 . 5/15
This is one of the best pieces I’ve ever read. I can’t express how much I admire your work.
Hugh Crane chapter 43 . 4/1
After so many years, I just re-read this story. I don't know if you still check your reviews. I wanted to say how much I have enjoyed this story. I've read It quite a few times over the years and have probably reviewed it before. It's wonderful and I hope you're doing well, where ever you are
blindneighbour chapter 11 . 3/7
"Hermione threw a small charm disguising their handwriting at the sheaf of parchment.."
it's the smallest detail but damn she's so clever ! i love how you included this little moment aa !
B chapter 47 . 2/28
I really love your story building a mystery you are so talented I was really love to read more of your stories of Tom and Hermione
FrostGunner2.0 chapter 49 . 2/8
Wow! That was one of the best if not the most original tom hermione fic ive read, which the more storys i read the more i appreciate a story that separates itself from others and isnt just a re-write of the book! The ending totally snuck ip on me though i didn’t realize how much ive been reading! Now im totally gonna snoop and see if you got any other amazing stories!
a.i-2-2 chapter 14 . 1/3
woww
cathn chapter 49 . 12/9/2023
Oh wow! I really enjoyed this fic and I wasn't at all certain that I would. None of the characters were at all ooc and I couldn't see how that would work. But it did. This was masterfully written and a triumph. Well done and thanks for sharing your talents.
cathn chapter 46 . 12/9/2023
Omg! That was a particularly exciting chapter. So well-written. I was on the edge of my seat.
cathn chapter 29 . 12/7/2023
I really don't know what to make of this! I hate being unsure of whom to cheer for. It doesn't help that I misread the pairing in the description either. Also, and I realise the ridiculousness of pointing this out at this late stage but it vexes me, pregnant stomachs are convex; not concave.
cathn chapter 24 . 12/6/2023
I have a very bad feeling about this! She has changed history...
cathn chapter 22 . 12/6/2023
Ooooooooh noooooooo! I was hoping that the dissolution of the blood bond would be a significant win for Hermione. Now she's in a worse situation than ever!
cathn chapter 16 . 12/5/2023
How confusing. I don't understand the significance of the birch branch.
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