Reviews for In Strolls The Bossman
Guest chapter 2 . 3/30
It's about time! Loved your 'what if's' for NCIS!
tealrose chapter 2 . 3/31
Three words...I like it! Wish they had done this in the show, because in real life this would have happened. T
SharonE68 chapter 2 . 2/14
I absolutely loved each and every twist...if only Gibbs had. Loved the spin you put on some of the stories that made me want to throw things at the screen...KEEP THEM COMING
Peace and Love831 chapter 2 . 2/7
I really liked this. I hate how in the show everyone just dismisses Tony. They treat him like crap, and act like he doesn't feel anything, even Gibbs does it also. Anyways, kudos
1sunfun chapter 2 . 1/8
SneakerTime chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
That was so good! I love your alternate endings for all of those episodes.
joniskpelare chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
wytygr chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
there are so many more. more than there should be, unfortuneately. and sadly mostly because of Gibbs.
trout1986 chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
I like this, kudos
MelodyPotterSnape chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
I absolutely love these snippets and I do hope that you eventually end up doing more. You have to be one of the best NCIS fanfiction writers. I love how Gibbs handled the Dead Air episode by essentially firing them.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
Hey. I think you're a really good writer. I enjoyed this. :)

I do personally, think that Tony and McGee are actually the most mistreated in the show. (which I'm sure you wouldn't agree with sense I know you don't really care for McGee all that much) I think Gibbs can def be a little too hard on tony sometimes. Like he gets in trouble for stupid stuff and not for the things I think he should get in trouble for. Like I think the jokehing with McGee in the beginning got a bit mean on Tony's part, but I also think Abby kind of messed with Tim's mind over the years. Idk, I really liked what you did with all of them except I skipped the dead air tag, because the writer's made a grave mistake with the quip about turning the radio off, and it just makes me depressed. I feel like you fixed a lot of them nicely, except there actually have been a few Tony moments that I'd like to fix where Tony was kind of scripted as an ass. Which deep down, we know he isn't. A few out-of-character-ass-ish moments on McGee's part too. Like when he said the thing about tony having is own team (though I'm glad they made him feel bad for saying that and apologizing for it) also when he said he didn't know why the director didn't give him the job. (though I like to think that he was joking, also in the episode where Abby tells McGee that she read his physc evaluation and the thing about his ego or whatever, I like to think that he was just trying to bring up his ego because Abby kind of knocked it down) I'll stop talking about this now, because I'm sure you don't really give a crap. Lol XD

Still enjoyed a lot of these. :)
mmnight chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
One episode that still gets me pissed when ever I see it on USA re-runs is "Bait"... crap on wanted someone anyone to tell Ziva to shove it.. through whole episode she harping that Tony didn't what he doing.

And let us not forget. .. Shepard harping on Tony if he the had the "balls" in front of Ducky to make the call... like really Director, Gibbs left Tony in charge for a reason...

The ending were everyone is asking what movie he got the idea from.. if I re-call it Ziva who asked in the first place...

No one gave Tony credit for he did... aahh saving the kids plus Gibbs

Gibbs should have dressed down Ziva and Shepard for undermining Tony authority!

You wrote a great one-shot on "Dead Weight"

Unfortunately for all of us their are too many episodes that need to be addressed on the wrongs. Especially after Ziva came on the show
Guest chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
It's hard to pick an ep cause half the time it's Gibbs himself that's an arse to Tony for no reason. But i have thought of a couple

Season 2 ep 2 The Good Wives Club, i thought Tony deserved an apology from both Kate and McGee for comparing him to a serial killer the whole ep but also a bigger acknowledgement than Gibbs saying Tony name first cause without Tony they would have found her or worked out who did it. Mr MIT and Miss Profiler came up with nothing

Season 3 ep 7 Honour Code same thing really, It's Tony that comes up with the only correct info, all through the ep until close to the end McGee and Ziva this time are saying it's the guy who was kidnapped and that Gibbs is wrong and is too close to his son that they are looking after but Tony trusts Gibbs gut and finds the info

Also and expanding on Dead Air what exactly were McGee and Ziva jobs that day, Tony was talking and collecting the info, Abby went through it all, so when the bobsy twins decided to turn off the radio why not go back to the office if they were so okay about what they did

I'll probably come up with more though LOL
k13cat chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Speaking of eps that need a fix - everyone including Gibbs needs a head slap for how they treated Tony in 'Family.' Also a slap down for the restroom stalker Ziva because if Tony had done the same invasion of privacy he would have been up on charges.
ambard10 chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
i think that sometimes Gibbs dont respect to tony... in the episode 1 and 2 o the season 10, the bomb in the ncis everyone had someone less Tony and and Gibbs never cared for him ... never asked if he was okay... that hurt to tony very much... i like your written
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