Reviews for Diamond in the Flesh by Indie Rayne
Rob Smut Lovers chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
I really got into the 'feel' of this story. (What the hell was going on with Phil there in the beginning? That was crazy!) Anyway, I enjoyed your Edward and Esme characterisations very much. Well done. Thank you. RoseE. x
DazzledCaroline chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
I loved it. I like that you made us believe that Bella is the first girl because of the contest photos. So it was a good surprise when she appears all attitude and sailor mouth. Great dynamic between them.
amandac3 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Loved this. The ending was perfect. :) Good luck!
NanLikesEmmie-Bear chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
OMG, love love love! My fave was definitely the first roof scene! Bella so tough and their fights are def a-do-ra-ble! Good luck with the contest X)
JessaCloud chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
I really enjoyed this. Their banter is so fun! I'd love if you chose to continue it after the contest. It's great! :)
Tinsley Warren chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Aw how beautiful!

Loved the end!

Great entry!
Y-knott chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Fantastic story and a great read! Thank you for sharing
Good luck with the contest!
mdsngrc chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
This was absolutely wonderful and I loved every bit of it! :D
debslmac chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
loved this