|Reviews for Artistic Endeavors|
| Twinklepuffs chapter 1 . 2/12
That ending. So cute! Haha. Just loved this.
| NYPDm07 chapter 1 . 1/1
Absolutely amazing! I loved the adorableness, the excellent writing, the lovely detail and Flynn's personality. Wonderful work :)
| Firework's Feelings chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This was so good. My eyes were glued to the screen once he release that groan, man, you know your stuff ;)) I love it .
| E.E chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Oh my gosh. Apart from some spelling errors that was so amazing and fantastic! There was never a part that pulled me out of the story. Keep writing!
| pancakevampire chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Hothothothot! Loved it!
| Emily chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Aww, beautiful and interesting! I love when people take a love scene to a whole different place, something that isn't in every M rated fic. Well done! (clapping hands together)
| Umbre0n chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
| Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I loved this. I really think you stayed true to their situation and their characters and Rapunzel is just so adorably cute I can't stand it. (She's so innocent it hurts.) I love how you portrayed Eugene here, like Eugene and Flynn are two totally different people, it added something to his character and made him a little more endearing. Ah and the situation of body painting is just perfect for them. I seriously see this happening between them.
Very nice job. I absolutely adored this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
I like it but I feel like you made repunsel(not how her name is spelt I know) too innocent.
| mommypenguinhd chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Wow...just wow. I have not read a Tangled fic in quite sometime, and I'm so happy I found this one. I think you caught them both just so right. This is excellent. Thanks so much for sharing it!
| tinytiff chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Wonderfully written. Totally awesome story!
| CBooBoo2 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
You're such a talented writer. That was great c:
| Tangledgirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
This was just lovely. So sweet, dirty, and yet so perfectly them- with Rapunzel being oh so innocent, and Eugene unable to shake all of Flynn away. I loved this :D
| JessicaJ chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Well I did keep wondering when this would appear- I actually grinned with joy as I recognised the same turning point I used - that, 'oh, we've run out of skin, what ever shall we do?'. So innocent and yet so heavily laden with implication! so exciting...
I love the restraint Eugene shows here- its not dissimilar to Vincent I guess in the earlier chapters of Moths, but it's for slightly different reasons. Eugene knows he is a man of the world, but she is pure and innocent, almost outside of normal existence. With Vincent, he shares his body with monsters, and thus is too tainted for anyone to possibly consider.
I did spot one typo: Furtive peaks should be furtive peeks?
I liked the imagery of the foreign lady and her henna paint, I did feel though that the story lost a teeny bit of pace between that and the actual interaction between Eugene and Rapunzel. Otherwise, this was wonderful, thank you so much for posting it, and keep writing- I will always read!
| pseudanonymous chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Checked the 'Tangled' section on a whim before bed, and found this - so pleased! As with everything I've read of yours so far, I loved it. Beautifully written, consistently in-character, and a charming insight into the emotional (and physical) relationship between these two. Please please please don't stop writing for them! I look forward to your next piece. All too eagerly.