Reviews for Checkmate
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
This. Gave. Me chills.
Souless666 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Loved this.

I see you have come to the same conclusions I have, concerning Ezekiel.

Its clear he was not one of the Angels kicked from heaven by Metatron. The fact he can heal proves that. I frimly believe he's one of the Angels that fell with Lucifer. Which means, that he is not Ezekiel (not the one Cass thinks he is, anyway).

The big question I hope they answer is how he is able to possess Sam?

Castiel told Dean way back that he was able to possess Clair because she was related to Jimmy. And Micheal made that same claim when he possessed John the younger. There is no way an angel can possess Sam, (Or Dean for that matter) unless they have somekinda connection to Lucifer and Micheal; even if they say yes.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
WinchesterGrl09: I love your Come Darkness, Come Light verse. I hope you continue it.
ellie.reynolds.777 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Hmmm interesting... I still believe in Ezekiel being good though, I'm hoping they (the writer of the show) are not gonna do another "the road to hell is paved with good intentions"?
Cause Cas already did that and look how that turned out (hee)

I love the story so far, you are an awesome writer :)
Mirya Lirin chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
would this be just the thing? i had wondered about that, Zeke's still got his powers, and i haven't seen other angels with any, just with angel blades. and when he appeared when those two demons who were with abaddon attacked him? you could see how injured he was, WITH HIS WINGS. kind of like when Castiel showed his wings when he was hurt and losing his grace. hmmmm...
LAHH chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Fascinating story. Thanks for writing
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Crowley's ..."My what blue eyes you have..."

Perfectly, sassy him!

Adore, adore the chess theme! I want artwork to go with this piece! Better to be the player...bit rocked!

Zeke's nonverbal bits...are very hot! The strong silent type...he he...

I am a Soulless Sam fan and Zeke ranks right up there...and He may even surpass. Just sayin'.

Zeke's 'what you intend for evil I use for good'...guh! Yes! Zeke! Please be good!

My fav part - Zeke smiling like a cat amused by a feisty mouse.

And again you write the angel as he is...a third person...yet we never forget Sam is still there.

Beautiful ending words!


Smooth and strong writing!
Thank you,
Junilia chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
I love me some cryptic tags and conspiracy theories
Nice one. I like the idea but this just leaves me wanting more. Maybe you'll give us some more details sometime, I'd love that! (I can totally see this as a part of a great complex multi chap story)
Thanks and well done!
Sara.B chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
So I've just finished reading all your 'Come Darkness, Come Light' stories and they're awesome! (Though, honestly, your stories usually are). You get the characterisations so perfect, whether it's Dean, Sam or even Crowley! I can totally see them all speaking when I read through your stories.

Oh and I am so, so curious about Ezekiel, in the show and in your verse - he is acting quite suspiciously, in this story particularly.

I look forward to any more stories you write in this verse!

Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Thank you for another great story in this 'verse.
I'm thrilled whenever I see you've posted a new one.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
I love how you intertwined scripture with Crowley and Ezekiel's conversation, so awesome! I don't believe Zeke is who he says he is, but that doesn't mean he is a bad guy (maybe?). Great job, thanks so much!
victoria chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
girl! how do you do this over and over again! OMG! This is amazing! It leaves you just on the edge of WTF! I love it! Thanks for another great story in this verse. Thanks for sharing your writing talents with the fanfic world.
Cdw43 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
' because Sam has a perpetual stick up his ass'... Love this!

Love Crowleys bravado even while he's chained to a chair. And Ezekial, don't know what to think there anymore!

Thanks Marianna.

yukio87 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Good as always or at least each story I read of you is good and amazing...I'll be waiting for the next story
3DBABE1999 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Hmmm.. So at least I'm not the only one thinking that 'Crowley' is really the once Archangel, now Prince of Hell, one if the 'Seven Devils', Satanael or Satan (as SHE would seem to prefer) and Ezekiel.. Hmmm.. Still thinking he's Gabriel .. But you keep tossing in hints about Azazel as 'Rex Infernus' is a song by the 'Cult ov Azazel'.. So.. Maybe... Samyaza? The angel sent to Hell for telling his human wife, the mother of his the True Name of GOD, who stayed in Hell for seven generations till he received judgement and presumably earned his freedom but his grace never fully healed and so he was presumably unable to return to Heaven.. Am I close? Azazel and Samyaza both led the Grigorri together after all, so it'd make sense if after his time in Hell his eyes turned yellow like his brother Azazel's (oddly enough according to lore Lillith was Azazel's and Samyaza's mother and LUCIFER was their father.. But Samyaza seemed to strive for doing 'the right thing', for being good, while Azazel just gladly followed Lucifer's plans no matter what sort of evil came out of them..(
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