Reviews for Harry Potter and the Return of Heritage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you saved Sirius, I haven't read anything like that before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do enjoy when Umbridge gets what's coming to her. I enjoyed the parts with the Ancients Houses as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The magic of wards described is nonsensical. 20 death eaters could break through the wards of Peverell manor, which has stood for a millennia and unconquered(apparently). That too so fast that inhabitants couldn't even apparate out. Dumbledore, staff and entire village couldn't break hastily constructed wards, that too over an entire village with 15 minutes of time. Facepalm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is stupid. Why does he need to fly to the Dursleys when he can apparate? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the entire trial and defense of Sirius. Harry did very well and Amelia Bones putting Umbridge in her place was one of the best things in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying all the history in this story. I'm glad that Kreacher seems to be treating Harry respectfully and maybe Harry's treatment of him can rub off on Sirius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow thank you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow on to the next chapter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh my getting good |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow getting good |