Mrs Weasley is an annoying, shrieking, harpy!

That was quite enjoyable.

It is NOT common, among magicals, to have your wand snapped.

Metal mechanism? TV antenna? Chimney cover? Wtf?!

Voldemort and his followers could not come ON TO the property. No one EVER said anything about 40 mile perimeter.

Conservatory door? Put on airs much?! It's the goddamn back patio door. Probably a slider, at that. B.F.D.!

Wow. Just wow. Loving it, so good!

Nah. Gave it a couple chapters to see if it'd pull up, but that was a heck of a way to kill an interesting story by jamming a requirement for someone to get hosed into it.

Good story to that point, but definitely didn't stick the landing.

Why the hell do you and other FF writers F' up the nickname MOONY with the surname Mooney. It's even the JKR canon spelling.
I highly recommend that you 'Find & Replace' all of the f**k'd up Mooney obscenities with MOONY.

Love the story, plot and writing style!

i am so outraged that you did the thing and am continuing to read in hopes that you have a twist in store to fix the worst thing jk did in the series (epilogue excluded). if not, i regret all the time i invested in reading this story

I love where you are taking this story! It is so good! Thank you for sharing it with us!

I found this post-edit. It's fantastic and I really enjoyed it! I like your great characterization and how you really avoided bashing.

Great fic all around.

YESSSSS! I can’t even begin to tell you how excited I was when I saw that there was an update! But when I then read that you were updating ALL the books AND continuing the series I immediately started rereading book 1 again! I’ve been following the Heritage Series for years and years. I pretty much came across it when I first started reading fanfaction about 8 years ago. I love the series and your version of Harry and the Ancient Houses. It’s by far my favorite fanfic series. I’ve reread it more times than I can count! I can’t wait to see the updates for book 2 and 3 and of course the rest of the series!

harry bettter rop Hermione and ron as friends theyve never acted as proper friends should

Good start for the story

"or wooden materials are easier to vanish than metals in inanimate objects" what is your reasoning for this? In real life metal may be a mix of elements (like the different grade of steel having various trace elements of carbon, manganese, tin, etc), it is singular positively charged atoms in a sea of electrons bonding it together Whereas wood is composed of water and various carbohydrates like cellulose, lignin, hemicellulose, and extractives that give woods it's color, smell, and other properties specific to each type of wood, plus there is the arrangement of the wood grain being more complex than metal (omitting Damascus steel)

Sorry for the lesson, my little autistic engineer brain threw a temper tantrum at the thought of metal being more complex than wood. I really am curious if this is canon (in which case jkr bungled), or something you came up with. If the latter, what was the reasoning.

Loved this, cannot wait till Book 2 is edited.