Reviews for A Walk |
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DinoGuy2000 chapter 1 . 6/22/2023 Quite the emotional fic! Anxiety, sadness, and a bittersweet (more sweet than bitter) ending! Great work! |
otherrealmwriter chapter 1 . 10/30/2017 This was a pretty good ending here. pretty sweet. |
Constellation Temptation chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 Aw! :D Cute. |
TopHatRose chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 I love this. So, so much. -u- |
BabyCharmander chapter 1 . 12/10/2013 ...Somehow I missed this. This was really sweet. I felt really sad when they got to the cemetery, but you ended it on a good note. And everyone definitely felt IC, which is really good considering the serious situation you put the characters in. I'll admit I was a little confused as to who the character with Dib was at first-I was thrown off by the fact that he was way shorter than Dib, but as soon as I realized who it was I felt dumb. XD; Of course Zim wouldn't grow any taller. Some of the sentences felt sorta choppy, but you wrote this a year ago and you've improved since, so that's not a problem. Nice work! |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 Christmas is a very powerful holiday indeed if it made Gaz at the very least show she CAN be a decent human being. In the end, its probably the happuest, Zim, Dib and Gaz will ever be in a long time. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |