Reviews for Hashirama's Heir |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is about as retard as you are. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is only a Genin still because the author is brain dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOW AND WHY IS NARUTO STILL A FUCKING GENIN |
![]() ![]() I’m pretty sure Tobirama was a sensor as well |
![]() ![]() Never mind this story made naruto the same height that he was when he came back from the 3 year training trip. |
![]() ![]() I’m glad someone got Naruto’s treatment in the village doesn’t get abused or chased by mob or gets ignored and no acknowledgement |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it has potential. I guess I'll see where this story goes. By the way, Naruto is related to Mito. Naruto is Mito's great grand nephew by blood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you literally made ibiki explain the point of the test |
![]() ![]() ![]() the dialogue is cringe kinda. there's no bearing because we can hear them talk about their thoughts. they are ninja, action is their friend, not their mouths outside of missions. the statemetn of the obvious is prominent. i really like this premise because the. mokuton is great, but its potential is being hindered by obvious statements that the characters remain dry and without drama. anyways, this is pretty great as a starting point |
![]() ![]() ![]() too much change too fast for their personalities to be this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() Bronx the enemies should have some kind of reaction to wood style |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. For a second I thought that Naruto will be dead. But that was a cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Kyubi is out of character, he won't treat anyone like that at that point in time, no matter who they are. Quite unexpected but no big deal for me personally. |