This was a great story, I'm glad you wrote it.

Just... wow! I don’t no wat to say! No mistakes or anything that doesnt add up. I just luv it so much!

being even closer with your transmigrations brother hmmmmmm NOT GREAT.

hahaahaaha my guy has already made th fanfiction funny just with the athour notes. BEWARE: I AM EASILY AMUSED

hope I'll do well LOL. YOU GOT 7K HEARTS AHHAAHAHAHAHAHAH LOL BUT ANYWAY LET ME FINISH THISSNICKERS

lol love the question. is this rape? wait, is it rape if I like it? I started laughing.

love the kurama quoting smokey bit lol

Nice fanfic

Wow i've never seen a fanfiction fall off so badly it just became so fucking boring to the point that i can't even continue reading it. Naruto is wayy too underpowered he has wood style sage mode and a pretty good control of the kyuubi chakra plus better training and experience and he cant fucking destroy Deidara,Sasori,Hidan,Kakuzu and Orochimaru the fuck, there is no way any of those guys can last 1 min with naruto he could literally kill most of them with a rasenshuriken hell even Pain shouldnt be able to touch this Naruto hes wayy stronger then he was in canon yet you insist on following canon for no reason there is no reason you shouldnt have killed Deidara,Hidan,Kakuzu and Orochimaru they are fodder coppared to this Naruto. Just imagine Hashirama having difficult time with any of them it's retarded and Sasuke being on the same level as Naruto when Naruto has sage mode plus good control of the kyuubi and Sasuke does not even have EMS is retarded too. The fact that Naruto still has not opened his seal is dumb also. The only reason why that has nlt happened is because you dont want to make Naruto even stronger but that in no wayy is a good reason for the stroy it's like Naruto is purposefully holding himself back. Authors need to learn to not be afraid to make their charachters op because at the end of the day that is one of the main reasons people read fanfic like this one to see how the story would have played if Naruto was stronger and you sticking so close to canon for no reason other than tension it's horrible and pointless i'd rather read a fanfic with no tension then one with artificial one like this one you should never do thing just for the sake of tension it is so infuriating to read when you know how much stronger your charchter is. I tried to continue reading this cause i liked the begining and the friendship of Naruto and Sasuke but i just cant do it anymore everytime i see Naruto not immediatly destroying oponents that are wayy weaker than him i get pissed off. There are a lot of good ideas but the exectution is not good at all.

That omake. Holy shit that omake. FUNNY as FUCK

He shoulda gotten shadow clone too
Training.

if you decide to continue into boruto i wouldn't mind i love this story

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Awesome story, loads of fun to binge-read! Thanks for sharing it with the world!

Just a pet peeve but females are blonde while males are blond, see the difference?