Just a pet peeve but females are blonde while males are blond, see the difference?

I thought he was dead, damn it, u got me good, i wanted to cry

Prodigy, the one thing naruto shouldn't be.

Naruto should have a serious advantage, water beats fire, and air beats lightning...

I like the story so far, but there is one thing that does annoy me slightly.

If Mikoto and Kushina where THAT strong as you depicted them in this chapter, then how did they die?

Kushina, yes, her death still makes sense, but Mikoto? She could've quite litterally nipped the entire Uchiha uprising in the bud...by simply saying no.

Still great story overall, though as I said sometimes your powerscaling makes less sense than cannon Shippuden's.

Bruh isnt yugito TOO old for my boy naruto? Shes like 27 or smth

Jesus christ tone down with anko the boy is 14 lmfaooo

Theyre children pls stop this innuendos

Awesome. Loved it. Hard to make an op Naruto story this ling and well done

SHEE his name is Cee

was a good fic, the epilog u had me thinking Naruto had died, with the flowers and everything

I like your story so far but I thought u should know people have become genin at the age of 5 before and I doubt they would allow them to be a ninja unless the can keep up with their peers. it's explained that because of the Chakra circulating the body they can start early without stunting their growth. like for example rock Lee. he wears those heavy weights and works out like crazy. if he was like us even 1/4 his workout at his age would have him bulk up like a body builder and he would be very short.

I’m so glad I was right in my earlier comment.
Chapter 11 and after...well at least so far is much better at showing Narutos strength. It’s not downplayed like before. The story is also a better pace, it’s still a little quick but much better then before.
The story is great so far, I highly recommend.
Chapter 3 or 4 to 10 are very similar to Canon but their are a few important details are different the Canon in those chapters so I wouldn’t skip them.

I know this has been finished for some time and I’m only on chapter but I gotta say it. You have a stronger team 7 and frankly a high chunin to mid Jonin Naruto with out Kuramas chakra but it literally follows canon almost to a tee.
Yes, I know you said it stops being Canon after chapter 11 but I mean you could of changed it at least a little more then what it is so far.
Anyways the story has promise so far and I hope it fulfills it. So far the main issue isn’t it following Canon since that does change but the story is extremely fast paced and I hope that’s only because the story is almost a perfect copy of Canon except for a few changes so far. So after chapter 11 I hope this changes, if not it’s not the end of the world.

Another Danzo plot...

I get that he's very convenient to use as a villain, but if there's anything more overdone than NaruHina fanfics, which is the one of the most oversaturated stories, it's got to be a Danzo plot.

What's most aggravating about having Danzo as a villain is that authors tend to just pull out problems out of their asses and say Danzo did it. We all know how he did it. It's what he ALWAYS does in EVERY fanfiction we've read. If creativity could be killed, then Danzo would be its killer.

TL;DRStory has your typical Danzo bullshit. Dropped.