Reviews for Dumbledore's Next Great Adventure Part 1 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() When will part 2 of this series come? Really enjoyed part 1... But this 'series' has not been updated since 2017-02-10 (approximately 8 years and 3 days ago) so is it abandoned? |
![]() ![]() Uh oh, Dumbledore's description of a Dark Wizard fits me like a glove. According to his characterisation I'm a Dark Wizard by proxy. I have yet to create a Skyrim character that does not use Destruction and Conjuration to harm others and definitely put them down. And if it's a Companion job it's even for their own advancement. However, they don't control their victims. If those are in their way they can just as well kill them. So, Illusion is the least used school of magic for them. And I still try to make them lawful good, and their victims have been deemed harmful to society. So I don't FEEL dark. Perhaps Dumbledore just doesn't speak for all magicals... Hehe, Vernon detests foreign food? I remember reading a story where he complains about those damn Pakis everywhere, right before ordering takeaway from an Indian restaurant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry to see that it's been so long since this story was last updated. I recently came across it and I love what's been happening so far! All the changes that Albus is making, and even the glimpses into Wulfric's reactions makes for a gripping read! I would say that even if this story is never updated, I would still come back to reread it, because it is just that good. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() part 2? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alas poor Wulfric, I knew him well. And I hope he continues to suffer in personal hell |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I've heard a lot of people rant about money before in HP. It makes me think of the explanations I've read of why Jane Austens income for Mr Darcy can't be simply translated into modern numbers. Money is far more complicated then we often realize |
![]() ![]() ![]() What, not even a cliffhanger, just straight up cut off? Where is the rest? Why is it marked as Completed? At least mark as Incomplete so I would know what I was getting into! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, fluffy filler chapter, the horror. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too much unnecessarily details. Just state the trains will be available and say the schedule is posted out. Noone needs minute by minute rundown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wulfric got an Clockwork Orange screen time, nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read dozens of stories with (quite frankly, usually deserved) Dumbles bashing, almost as much of "good, but leaves all the action to underaged MC"-Dumbles as well, but this idea is very intriguing, I can't wait to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re-reading the story as it is one of my favorites. Wishing you well, and hope someday you take a crack at continuing the story. |
![]() ![]() "His strict disciplinarian approach"? Snape goes beyond the pale! He's a bully that expects kids to already know the subject he's SUPPOSE to teach on their first day of the first year of schooling. And he's not quite as strict with discipline as McG thinks when he lets his snakes throw stuff into the lions' potions to ruin them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your last paragraph of this chapter reminds me of the old saying, 'the road to hell is paved with good intentions.' |