| Reviews for Dumbledore's Next Great Adventure Part 1 |
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   Katzztar chapter 19 . 2/25/2022 The contrast between Snape's words and actions between last chapter and this one, shows that he is a hypocrite. If he really practiced what he preached, then he wouldn't be sneering at points awarded to, or mention of, Gryffindor in general and Harry in particular. |
| BarbedCaress chapter 26 . 2/18/2022 For a story marked complete, the ending seems very abrupt, imo |
| geoyytr chapter 26 . 1/30/2022 I would love to see a sequel to this |
| marvinkitfox1 chapter 1 . 1/19/2022 Today I learned: When someone misspels "The" by using an "n" as the second character, my dyslexia throws a complete fit and induces an instant migraine. It's so bad I cannot even reproduce the offending text here directly. It starts with Dumbledore saying "Parchmentwork: ..." Apparently is *looks* so close to the correct word, that my eyes accept it. Then reject it. then accept it. then reject it, and force a re-read of the word. Then accept it. Then reject it. then accept it. then reject it, and force a re-read of the word, then AAARGH! |
| Ben welsh chapter 26 . 1/15/2022 Thoroughly enjoyable, my competency kink has been most satisfied. |
| nif-ravenpuff chapter 26 . 1/16/2022 What a pleasure to read this version of APWBD. Lots of great new material here too. Thanks for writing and sharing it! |
| Pointer3109 chapter 1 . 1/13/2022 An interesting premise and one I haven't considered before. Its even more along my personal idea of heaven, I doubt the floating clouds and streets of gold. I believe heaven will be that eternal reward for good work, everywhere. Which fits in rather nicely into your story. |
| Obsidian Nova Arc chapter 23 . 1/11/2022 oh god this chapter was so cute found me old weathered heart beating once more good show |
| lschierer chapter 26 . 1/7/2022 I really enjoyed this, I would be interested if you return to do the implied sequel. |
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/23/2021 **taps mic** Um...is there more? |
| Wulfric chapter 26 . 12/20/2021 This is unacceptable! I demand I get my life back in part 2! Did you know how many greater goods I can make in these situation?! And young Harry need to be guide in a right way for his destiny to fight Tom! |
| bkjar chapter 26 . 12/11/2021 Will there be a Part 2?! |
| bkjar chapter 23 . 12/11/2021 I don’t know if anyone has mentioned it yet but I’ve noticed the names of the Grangers has changed in this chapter. Graham and Jane to Dan and Emma. |
| dianaanne chapter 26 . 12/9/2021 Good job replacement Albus! |
| Dayside chapter 26 . 11/24/2021 It's an immense shame that this story looks abandoned. Wonderful concept. |