|Reviews for Reasons|
| sinedd662 chapter 1 . 2/6
I can not read on this repulsive beginning fuck sasgay it's disgusting garbage
| Taz Bill chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
aig correct me if I'm wrong...
secret69: Uzumaki is not being used as a middle name. he is honoring both his father and his mother by using a hyphenated last name.
epkbutle: I personally see Lee's death as a motivational factor. Even though they've already killed Shino, they've had time to mourn. with Lee's death they'll now all have the motivation to do what needs to be done. Otherwise it would be hard to believe the 'rookies' being ruthless in the coming battle.
These are just my views and how I've interpreted this story so far. everyone interprets this differently.
I do have to say the I agree with the comments about plot development. It feels like half the story has been filler. Now I find nothing wrong with filler. That being said, personally, your story is not long enough for that much filler. Also your chapters aren't long enough to be posting full chapters of filler.
Overall, regardless of any personal issues I've started about this story, I do actually enjoy the story. I read alot of fanfictions...like ALOT! 99% of which are Naruto or Naruto crossovers. That being said, the idea and plot behind this one is original, to me at least. I can tell that you've put some thought into this, now you just need to put that same thought and time into your spelling and grammar. It's by no means unreadable, but it does need some work. Then again, no one here can say that their stories are perfect, especially myself lol.
| secret69xd chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
Naruto Uzumaki- Namikaze? wtf. is that, there is no such thing as that in Japanese named characters, you should research at least how Japanese authors named Japanese characters. there is no such thing as middle name.
| Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Dam you r a hippie
| jugar38 chapter 17 . 2/16/2017
You want to know what I think of your story?
I think it is FUCKING AWESOME!
Granted, I'm not happy about Shino and Lee being dead, but if it's for the story, then I can deal with it.
Uhhhhh... what else.
I like the idea of Fox safe mode being in levels.
I like NaruIno.
But I am sad for Tenten. Maybe she gets with somebody after they defeat the 5? That would be nice since she lost both Neji and now Lee.
I like that Obito is with Anko and Kakashi might have a thing with Kurenai. I like both of those pairings. And even though it hasn't been a major focal point, I think that the intermittent appearance of these side relationships has been at a pretty good level.
Love the story and keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
Your a hippie
| arinasution5 chapter 17 . 12/14/2016
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/2/2016
this fucking sucks you have no idea what you are doing
| 94blake chapter 17 . 10/31/2016
When you incorporated fairy tail as a book naruto wrote i enjoyed the reference but once youbstarted toninclude dragons it went down hill and then the whole walking dead scene was just so lame. Chatacter death for plot development is cool but nojebhas come of it yet.
| Oddballzebra chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Dumb and unrealistic
| Spaded Ace18 chapter 16 . 9/20/2016
short chapter but good hope it updates soon keep it up
| Spaded Ace18 chapter 15 . 9/14/2016
continue the story please hope to see it updated soon
| Looney Jack chapter 15 . 8/24/2016
It was a good chapter, and like that your not scared to kill off characters
| epkbutle chapter 15 . 8/9/2016
As a writer, I'm hoping that this death actually serves a purpose other than to pull at heart strings. I for one absolutely detest the use of character death as an emotional tool that doesn't actually bring development to a story. Seeing as the chapter literally cuts off abruptly after the reveal, I'm at an enpasse as to what to think at this point but I'm seriously hope that I waited for an update to get a cliffhanger for a chapter that shouldn't have been a chapter in itself. The plot literally didn't move forward. We got a power up highlight, doomsday bad news, a miracle last ditch secret move yet to be revealed and a character death. I hated this chapter. I hope beyond hope that the plot development to come is fantastic. This chapter just didn't measure up to the rest of this story. Again I'm not in your head so I don't see the big picture but this was truly a disappointment. My reviews are never this negative and I don't want this review to be a deterrent to continuing the story. I just hope you develop more, stand still chapters are my pet peeve :/