|Reviews for Viewfinder|
| britata348 chapter 7 . 3/30
Ah! This is so cute :) I love you're characterization, and the slow pace. It's just an incredibly enjoyable read! I'm excited to read more!
| Poche00Deea chapter 7 . 3/16
I'm so happy to have found this story . I really like about it that it has a unique plot , but I hope that something new happens soon . I would love to read !
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/1
naww loved it; I really liked how they are both in character
| blackfeather9 chapter 7 . 2/14
this was so cute! love it please continue :) loved sasuke and his IN CHARACTERNESS perfect and Hinata is just arhhh so adorable love it. - BFeather9 xxx
| Chew it Over With Twix chapter 7 . 2/12
| Arasia chapter 7 . 2/12
I loved how sweet this story is, and the mellow tone of the writing.
I also really liked Sasuke's characterization, he's aloof, withdrawn and slightly abrasive as normal, yet he's human, his hurt is understandable, and he's trying to get better.
I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter :)
| kenni no. 1 chapter 7 . 2/11
just like shikamaru, i'm amused with sasuke's predicament.
| LizzieBCT chapter 7 . 2/11
Stories like this always catch me by..suprise. Mostly because I am conflicted on how I feel about it as there are a lot I seem to like there's a lot of flaws. First lets start with pacing, your pacing is a bit fast everything seems kind of rushed and lacking in detail were its needed most, so far the plot also seems to be at a stand still sense so far I can't point out what IS the plot. There are some details that are strangely placed for example I don't feel like its necessary for Hanabi to know all the stuff she does sense I don't see what she has to do with the story in its self it would have been transitioned more if Hinata found out on her own give her more of a character. Also the relationship of sasuke and Hinata confuses me as I have no idea what they are to each other, the fact that sasuke liked her caught me by suprise as so far I don't know how he found to like her, when and why, we don't even have hinata's view point, again ther seems to be a lack of detail were its needed. But as much as there were flaw I couldn't help but enjoy how you made the characters there all unique and well written there characterization as well was a breath of fresh air to me, the story in its self the idea is original to me as I haven't read many story with this kind of plot line and I tip my hat to you for coming up with such a thing. I will continue to read this story though and I hope you consider what I have said so far it's not ment to be harsh but informative. Hope you update soon
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/11
I love this! I do hope that Sasuke will open up about his former life to Hinata. Update i love your story :) great work
| BekotaTheMonsterHuntress chapter 7 . 2/10
love love love love love love! now get to work on that essay! lol
| Wendbria chapter 7 . 2/10
Thank you for updating! Love seeing these two together. And I like how you are making sasuke nervous and taking their relationship slow
| Rose101226 chapter 7 . 2/10
Love it! I just want something to happen between them...Arg I know the story is gonna develop slowly...I'd wait for it then. I don't know why I want to see Sasuke jealous! I such a bad girl.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/10
| farahb chapter 7 . 2/10
Aww Sasuke was such a cutie in this chapter! And Hinata! Such a temptress! ;)
Oh btw, one question. Are all the teachers (Rookie) the same age in this story? Cause you mentioned Sasuke following Shikamaru the 'older man'. I guess it makes sense to not have them all at the same age though. Imagine having a 50 year old Lee sprouting out stuff about youth hahahahahaha.
| Sarcastic Nightmare chapter 7 . 2/10
Awww he wants her phone number...how cute! Can't wait to read more. Steamed/boiled potatoes are excruciatingly hard to deal with... Anyway as I said early, super cute and can't wait to read more.