Reviews for Look How You Turned Out
SLKerouac chapter 80 . 11/2/2014
This is a story of growing. It was Bella being with Edward and Juney before taking off to Chicago. Edward had feelings for Bella but did not let it show. He let her go to live her life. Bella tried but knew that Chicago was not for her. She had left here heart in Forks. It was with Edward and he did not even know that. It took Bella deciding that Chicago was not what she wanted. Home it was. Back to Forks. Back to see if Edward would think of her as an equal. To see if there could be anything between them. If there could be love. It did not take long once Bella was back but they had to live threw some turmoil. Changes that needed to be made. Bella found out things about her father she never knew. She found that she had a love for Juney that had always been there. A wedding that happened pretty fast after Charlie was hurt. Edward had wanted Bella as his wife all along but had to wait for her to get there. Juney now had a mother but took time for him to think of her as that. To call Bella his mother but it came. There were so alike. They both had mother's that walked away from them. Bella knew what he was feeling even though he never voiced it. In one short year so many things changed. Moving back. Getting married. Buying Billy's. Edward running for Sheriff. Changing houses with Charlie and renovating. The biggest change was adding to the family. It was now four of them now. They were a family now. Edward had what he wanted. Bella had what she wanted. Edward, Juney and now Rebecca. It was them all living their lives until Bella heard from Charlie that Edward was fine. That night Bella and Edward talked more. She was there for him so that he was able to work threw all of the feelings regarding his job. In the end Bella let Edward know that he owned her. That she would never leave him. She would always be there for him. Thanks for writing this story. It was a love story when neither would let the other know what they were feeling. Of letting the person you love fly. To see the world. To experience hoping that they would come back into your life again. Thanks!
smook chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
I've been reading your story since Friday and finished last night.
Thank you, I really enjoyed, its amazing the secrets we keep thinking it's for the better, and in the end - well in your end it is as it should be - HEA!
Thanks for a fun and little bit angsty read. LOVED IT!
Guest chapter 69 . 10/13/2014
I love Juney!
HollywoodTwore chapter 80 . 10/11/2014
This has taken so much longer than expected to read and I loved every inch of it. Your style of writing is different to what I've encountered before, something which I never would have thought that I would like, but you surprised me. Thank you for sharing
pauleen chapter 76 . 10/9/2014
I love this chapter. I teared up a little. Juney is so much a bella's boy. Two of a kind.
CallMeJazz chapter 80 . 10/6/2014
Awww all the characters the story ahhh so well written. The sweetest story ever. thank you :))
nessie88 chapter 24 . 9/23/2014
I love your sense of humor and your writing! thank you for sharing! hophop on to my next chapter, I can't stop!
myhubbyissoedward chapter 80 . 9/17/2014
All I can say is wow great story.
bebeginja chapter 80 . 9/16/2014
Sorry it took me so long to finally read one of your stories, but boy am I so glad I finally did! This was my first, and in no way my last. I love your story telling! I literally belly laughed out loud at a lot of parts. I loved this crazy Bella and her unique quirkiness I've never read in this character before. I loved the relationship with Juney. Such originality here, in the story and in the way you tell it. In your words. Not that you don't already know what talent you possess :) Thank you for sharing your gift with us for free! I look forward to making my way through your list of stories!
renochick chapter 80 . 9/14/2014
This is the most wonderful story. I can't believe it's taken me so long to come across it.

It was beautiful. I read it again immediately after finishing.

Thank you for sharing such a great story.
cullensrule chapter 80 . 9/13/2014
I truly loved this story. The three of them (Edward, Bella and Juney) and Charlie across the street were very special and sweet together. Rebecca's a lucky girl to be born into it. I will miss them and have to come back often to get that happy feeling this story gave me.
Nikki1219 chapter 27 . 9/8/2014
This is such a wonderful little story...Charlie and Juney's Operation Loveboat is the cutest thing EVER!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 80 . 9/3/2014
Love, love, LOVE. So, so good.
Thank you.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 79 . 9/3/2014
I almost don't want to click 'next,'
since that means last chapter, and over.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 78 . 9/3/2014
I understand that feeling ... the quick passage
Of that precious commodity: time.
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