Reviews for The Courtship
Farfalla818 chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
The story feels rushed and a little silly in its overall syntax. This seems more like someone's daydream summed up in the written form.
h2olgd chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Love Richard's reactions to his first attempt. Good story!
crzykittyfangirl chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
I love this story but I just thought I should mention, are you aware that you posted it again after the ending author's note?
Colleen chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Sweet story. Should be published.
cuinwen chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
This was an amusing story although unrealistic. You would do well to rework it with more skepticism and longer letters from Elizabeth's side.
Lisa Cooper chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
"The Courtship...", your version was quite good. You did well for only a couple thousand words. Looking at the length I would have questioned if Elizabeth would have fallen in love with so little interaction, and as fun as secret interaction could be; my sensibilities were questioning if she should trust a nearly nameless admirer so fast. Somehow I went for it, and took to this fancy hook, line, and sinker. Congratulations on your salesmanship. I also thank you for this pleasant story. It passed my time most pleasantly, Lisa Cooper
Princess of Imagination chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Loved this one shot! Really awesome!
Varina Savid chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
A love letter to WOO the woman you love. Mr Darcy was waiting to win the heart of Elizabeth instead of that dreadful proposal at Hertfordshire.
Woe is used to express grief, regret, or distress
Woo is to try to make (someone) love you : to try to have a romantic relationship with (someone)
Jim chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
For 'woe' try 'woo'!
CartasDeAmor chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
This is a fun story.

You might consider changing your synopsis wording. I think you meant to say woo instead of woe, and it makes a huge difference.

Typos can be so fun. One time I wrote that someone pooped instead of popped.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
The dreadful proposal was at Hunsford parsonage in Kent, not Hertfordshire. Unless you think his second proposal was dreadful?
Little C chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Hi, I liked your spin on P&P, you've obviously put a lot of time and effort into writing your story, which I enjoyed thanks :) look forward to reading more of your work
Avanell chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Oops, a double post. Great fun, short story! enjoyed it! But with the indicated length, was hoping for more ;) Awesome!
loulou25 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Bonne idée l'implication du colonel dans la déclaration de M Darcy. J'aime aussi la correspondance de l'admirateur secret.
Peut être qu'il manque un peu de scènes d'intimité (de mon couple préféré) après la découverte de l'admirateur et l'acceptation de Lizzy, mais J'adore!
Excellent Fiction!
4leafclover0120 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
It's an interesting premise. One thing I have to point out though is the should be woo...not woe.
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