Reviews for I Dream of Caffrey
JimChou chapter 2 . 4/18/2016
That was really excellent, brilliant! So much fun and a marvelous rewriting of the pilot where you managed to keep everyone in character! Amazing. And a touch of emotion and insight as well. I can't understand you got so few reviews... Perhaps you should rephrase and center the summary on the rewriting of the pilot to attract more readers. This thing with the caliph was really funny but some people won't read it if you put it first, thinking it's like Aladdin for kids.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2014
"What's up with you, Neal?"
"What? Nothing."
"You're acting weird."
"I just had a really... really, REALLY weird dream."
"Oh?"
"I was genie."
"...Is this a good thing?"
"Well, i was trapped in a bottle. You were the king who found my bottle. Much to my annoyance. And once you got to know me, yours too."
"Ah."
pechika chapter 2 . 11/12/2013
hehe cute.
Margarete1 chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Good night,

Really amazing, I never thought it was a dream, but it was perfect as you intrduziu all personagens.O Neal being a genius was phenomenal. Very good indeed love the friendship of Peter and Neal. I hope it continues with new chapters.

Kisses and see you soon

Margarete