Reviews for the fire to her ice
Abaddorn chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
for he was the fire to her ice 3 awwwww
12345alienware chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
The plot is okay, and the grammar and sentence structuring seems fine, but you really need to work on your capitalisation skills.
PaC chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Maybe part of it was low expectations as one shots this short generally are pretty lame.

But really, I was surprised, not bad really, despite so short it wasn't super rushed or all that lame, not bad for super short one shot.
Penny is wise chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Awesome but depressing story.