Reviews for The Reluctant Bride
CaptainToast321 chapter 5 . 5/19/2016
I really don't understand your government form. It's kinda retarded at how it would never work. Two male kings and a queen? One of the kings married to the queens, and the other alone? It would NEVER work. You should of just had Aegon die off. That government would last maybe a year before tensions ripped it apart, especially in Westeros, which has been a monarchy based government, for the last 8000 years... No sharing of power. None of the Targaryens either did that either.
Other than that bullshit government, the story's been pretty good so far, so thanks for you hard work.
mrsjessiepinkman chapter 53 . 4/29/2016
Are you ever going to tell me what Aegon and Sansa had planned? Poor auld Gendry. Politics is not his thing, but I can't wait to see how Tyrion stirs the pot when he's asked to help :-)
Veridissima chapter 53 . 4/24/2016
GREAT chapter!
Really LIKE how you wrote Gendry's thoughts
Veridissima chapter 52 . 3/24/2016
Really LOVED Gendry in the forge! Tobho was GREAT!
Ohh... and the scene with Aegon was really good
And LOVED Arya and Sansa - they were AMAZING!
LottieDot chapter 52 . 3/23/2016
Okay. I just called you wicked. Now you are evil. But again I still worship you so you can do no wrong. I loved this chapter. I want to get to Dany/Jon and the GO! Lets get going missy! Yeah the Sansa/Aegon stuff is amazing but lets get this girl some Others! Love you to the moon and back.
LottieDot chapter 51 . 3/23/2016
Ugh. I'm glad I waited to read this chapter till the next one was posted. You are wicked my Lady. But that's why I love you
mrsjessiepinkman chapter 52 . 3/21/2016
Sweet ending. Arya really has come a long way, baby
can't wait for more x
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
Let shireen marry aegon. All hail queen shireen! xxxx
Guest chapter 52 . 3/21/2016

Guest chapter 52 . 3/21/2016
I've been filling this story for so long! I really love it. I only wish shireen and aegon would end up together I think they would complement each other. Ty is just a silly little boy in over his head. Look forward to more amazing workxxx
peetamad chapter 52 . 3/20/2016
wow i love that the dress is back and i cant wait this gentry sees her in it. what is going to happen to Sansa? usually i get a good feel of where a character is going but not this time. (which i am lovin, keep me guessing)
on a personal note is great to hear how happy you are with your puppy. Hudson is a really cool name
mrsjessiepinkman chapter 51 . 3/20/2016
Once again, we'll take any chapter you can give. Short and all!
Jaysus, Ty has had a dramatic personality change. Talking to Arya like that!? He wouldn't want to do it in front of Gendry. He's likely to get a slap haha
Sansa is breaking my heart. You're the only writer who can make me emphasis with her. Even GRRM'sSansa is hard for me to take. I really understand the burden you have her under here. I'd probably be swigging milk of the poppy too :-(
Great writing, characterisation, storytelling blah blah blah. You know I love you x
Veridissima chapter 51 . 3/19/2016
Really LOVED Ty and his talk with Arya! But it's quite sad, with both of them missing Shireen
And Sansa and Arya were GREAT!

Ohhh... a puppy... I hope he's behaving better this week :)
Guest chapter 48 . 3/16/2016
Holy cow Lady. This was so well done. Almost heart wrenching. I truly adore you.
beachchick3 chapter 51 . 3/14/2016
Wow great chapter,
Very moving!
Keep up the amazing work
And have a good week
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