|Reviews for Babylon|
| Fireminer chapter 20 . 3/7
None to say today.
| Literary Eagle chapter 20 . 3/7
Yikes, poor Kaji. Granted, if his free will was eroding anyway, then Shinji could have done a lot worse than giving him to Misato. At least this way, Kaji is with a loved one. Shinji is sweet like that. But still... gah. *shiver*
| ktfcoyote chapter 20 . 3/7
I would weep for Misato's blindness if I didn't understand it's part of how she kept going after all that happened. Still, I'm happy for Kaji, and Shinji because I know he finds happiness in the happiness of others.
And I don't know how I'm going to stay sane until I find out what Tabris has planned for this night! I'm vibrating with anticipation. Would it be rude to plead for you to write faster?
| Literary Eagle chapter 19 . 3/1
Messed up attitudes indeed. Shinji sure is a cute little seven-horned lamb, though. :)
| Fireminer chapter 19 . 2/28
I couldn't even telling that this is love. Maybe the trope "Living Emotional Crutch" would be the most appropriate here.
| Ms Lilly chapter 18 . 2/22
I really, really like this story.
You write Shinji awesomely, you write everyone awesomely!
| ktfcoyote chapter 18 . 2/22
Totally sighing over Tabris with Shinji. Seriously love how you write them. You even made me not mind the thought of nipple rings. LOL!
Yui totally creeps me out. I vote she be returned to Hell as soon as possible. I might wish for Shinji to witness her perfidy, to free him from his useless devotion to a false image, but that would break his heart. Then again, Tabris would be there to comfort him. And that would be delicious.
| Literary Eagle chapter 18 . 2/22
I like that the tree sculpture from Chapter 1 actually leads somewhere important. Nice touch!
| Fireminer chapter 18 . 2/21
First part: Disturbing
Second part: Interesting
| Eizariya chapter 17 . 2/15
Poor Kyoko. The values of the Victorian era is really on another level of depravity altogether. Even with everything I've read about them they still manage to disturb me.
Also, Calvin's belief in predestination and his interpretation of it is...
| Literary Eagle chapter 17 . 2/14
Poor Kyoko. That was an interesting sidestory, and if a chapter about Asuka and Mari gets written later, I'm sure that will be very interesting as well!
| Fireminer chapter 17 . 2/14
I must say, being an atheist makes me escape so many paradox. Remember a particular quote from Victor Hugo: "Success looks like Greatness in covered"
And the answer is a big No.
Say, in case of someone has two souls in a body - parasite, or twin personality - and the dominant makes a pact with Devils, does it also covers the inferior soul?
| ktfcoyote chapter 16 . 2/9
Oh dear. Oh *snicker* dear. Poor poor Leliel is in for quite a *ahem* hard time, isn't he? Well, in that era (and most eras) it's not unheard of a father arranging a professional to initiate his son... Tabris is such a good dad. *peals of laughter*
| Eizariya chapter 16 . 2/9
An Evangelion Victorian AU is one of the things I've always wanted to read, so thank you for writing this. This is really well written too, so double gratitude from me.
I find Tabris' motivations and plans when it comes to humankind very confusing here. It seems to me he finds humans interesting but there's a sort of derision and exasperation there, I think, not much affection if any at all?
| Literary Eagle chapter 16 . 2/7
Aww, Tabris cuddling Leliel's Angel form! So adorable!