Reviews for Betrayal
NorthernMage chapter 1 . 6/20
God, I thought Loki was actually going to be dead and Jane would've stopped him too late...
FlowerPrincessoftheUniverse chapter 1 . 3/24
So, so sad... but oh so believable. Very well-written.
Autumn Fire Spirit Yggdrasil chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
You really messed up this time Thor.
Ihni chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
I ... this ... This hurt me. It was a wonderful, intense kind of hurt though. I mean ... Wow. Betrayal is just such a wonderful source of angst, especially when mixed with misunderstandings. And there's so many different kinds of betrayals, as this story shows. And I really really liked this one. I'd love to read more on this particular matter, but this was lovely as it was. Well done.
Reena chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Thor was such a dick here.
Omnicat chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Well, that had me bawling like a baby. Incredibly well written. ;_;
TheEvilAshleyness chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
:( I hope Loki doesn't die in this next movie. Thor is my favorite but I identify with Loki as the underdog with the popular macho brother.
darth vader chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO