Reviews for Heart of Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omg i just binged the whole fic. it's so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing history. I love your way of narrating, it's very good. Thanks for sharing this 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Finished it in one day it was so good. Good job writing this! It’s really well done. Almost made me cry towards the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! Full of detail and it kept you on your toes! Thank you! This was a great read! |
![]() ![]() Hopefully you resume your rewrite soon. Really looking forward to you revisiting this story with your improved writing skill. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really been enjoying this story. The interactions between Smaug and Katherine feel so real and natural. That being said though, I feel like you missed a glaring opportunity for further tension between her and Smaug. In spite of all the "bonding" the two had done, Smaug still was willing to hurt her. He promised her he would let no harm come to her after she had the vision about the one ring, yet he still did hurt her heart. He swore to her that it was not his intention to frighten her when she had that ordeal with her magic, and that he would never do it again, and yet he did. Even after all the time they've spent together, Smaug still sees her as nothing more than property, and did not hesitate to call her nothing, and that nothing was all she would ever be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please let there be a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm Crying |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! I do have a few questions though. Is she bathing during this time? What about her period? Lol. What exactly is she doing to keep up with her hygiene. XD especially with the dragon's great sense of smell. Sorry, I always wonder about this stuff in fics where the woman is held somewhere where she can't really take care of herself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I remember those Hobbit Production Diaries! They were so funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, they’re just so adorable. I’ve never read anything like this before. |