Reviews for Projections
bluebandaid chapter 4 . 10/7/2015
This was a very nice well written story. I was a little underwhelmed with Daryl's reaction to Carol's banishment in the show and I wish they could have spent more time on it so I'm glad you shared this fic with us. I liked reading it from Michonnes perspective, kinda cool seeing Daryl and Carol's relationship (platonic or not) from another set of eyes. Also I almost thought you killed her. As soon as I read "alone" and "flash of white" I almost had a heart attack. Nice little twist ya did.
bluebandaid chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
I really felt Daryl's anger. You did a wonderful job expressing his emotions!
dkflpn chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
I wish daryl had been made to be more clear that he was upset that carol was exiled. I needed to see something more like this
Henri Jane chapter 4 . 7/7/2014

deniselynne1966 chapter 4 . 5/20/2014
Mama's Stories chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
Wow! Sorry Rick no corn on the cob for you!
That was cool, I wanted Daryl to do that in the T. V. Show. So yes!
Mama's Stories chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
Sounds like Rick is losing it again!
Mama's Stories chapter 2 . 4/14/2014
It sounds like Daryl blames Rick for Merle's death?
Mama's Stories chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
I think it's great that Daryl told Rick his bussiness.
Rick gave up being involved in the group decisions, he had no right to ban Carol!
Pissed me off!
nolongerhere7777 chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
This was lovely, thank you so much for taking the time to share it.
This is basically everything I was hoping would happen when it came to this situation. Rick was always a frustrating character for me, but it was his words to Carol when he sent her away that cemented my dislike for him. To stop myself from rambling, he's a big hypocrite and he had no right to do what he did. Forget Rick.
What made me even more frustrated with the situation was Daryl's reaction to it. Again, to stop myself from rambling, Rick badly needs to get put in his place and I was hoping Daryl would be the one to do it. But alas! Rick never gets put in his place.
This was great in so many ways. It's beautifully written, with a simple sort of prose that doesn't go crazy with superfluous details. It tells a story. It was interesting to see the situation from Michonne's eyes rather than Daryl's. It's actually a choice I appreciate.
What I appreciate the most, though, was your keeping Carol out of what happened, for the most part. For me, at least, her absence brought about a vague sense of longing. And the relief that comes with the final statement gets stymied by the fact that it's also the ending LOL.
This is really great, I enjoyed it. :)
Girl in a White Dress chapter 4 . 1/6/2014
Daryl to the rescue! (I haven't seen season 4 yet and am kind of dreading it, so thanks for this. ;) )
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 4 . 12/17/2013
Love it xx
Daniyell37 chapter 4 . 12/5/2013
Oh my god you scared the SHIT out of me omg I hate I hate you. no this was fantastic I love you.
Pass the Porn Tea chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
This was definitely well-written! So kudos for that, though I couldn't see any of this actually transpiring. I think the love and respect Daryl holds for Rick is too great, and considering he himself said he wanted to put a bolt in whomever had killed Karen and David, well... I just can't see him saying these things. Not after all the understanding he's shown for Rick and his actions, even just in Season 4. And I definitely think Michonne would be %100 on Rick's side, so this narration is very strange to me. Sorry the more I think about it the more I see this fic being a wild fantasy! I'll stop here and just say this fic was well-written, and whatever happens I think we're all nervous and excited for tomorrow! Gah. Thanks for sharing!
RanHomeAgain chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
I finally found the time to read this and boy did I enjoy it. This was definitely the fix-it I needed after these past episodes.

I particularly liked how this was set from Michonne's POV. It was unexpected but very refreshing and I really liked the little insights to her character and the insights she gave on others. Her views of Carl and Rick were especially well versed to me. And I want to point out a line I really liked in the first chapter; "the heart of the machine..." line was a wonder turn of phrase that really stuck out to me.

I also really liked how this ended. It didn't go as I expected and I like that I was surprised. I would really like to see what happens next between Daryl and Rick, or what transpired between Daryl and Carol out there, but over all I'm satisfied with what we were given.

Overall, this was a very nice story.
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