Reviews for Indisposed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! Now Owen needs someone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you a sons of anarchy fan only asked cause I'm on chapter 14 and Gemma is one of the ppl in your story I'm a sons of anarchy fan my favorite are Jax and 5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a big thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() So funny that you made Kensi afraid of the mouse. In your boat shed story Deeks is scared of a mouse. Pardon the interruption don't want to slow down your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed all 38! #Densi |
![]() ![]() I know this is an old story. But I really liked it. Just wanted to let you know. Keep on writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very Nice |
![]() ![]() LOVED the end of the interaction between Hetty and Richie. Could easily picture her smile as her scurried away nervously. Only one loose end that wasn't tied up: What happened to the mouse? |
![]() ![]() Yeah, it's only right that she burned the lasagne. Wouldn't be Kensi if she didn't. And her talking to Monty was also cute and very in-character. I think them going from the teasing to "make love, not war" and then onward was rushed, and Marty's "Hell, yeah! That's what I'm talking about." was too immature, even for him. I would have like to have seen a little smoother transition from the nervous teasing to the physical part. I know they've been dancing around it for years, but this just felt too abrupt. Onward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Kensi leaving that present for Deeks was adorable! One question: can a lockpick actually be used to re-lock something? Just a weird thought that occurred when reading this. |
![]() ![]() Very cute. Gotta love jealous Kensi. I'm waiting to see how you handle Callen's "I don't date anyone who has her own handcuffs" rule. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol yup the season 6 premiere was awesome, they even released some deleted scenes of deeks telling kens that he was falling in love with her and they kissed |
![]() ![]() Wait no no no no that cant be the end! Noooooooo Please do a squel if this story is over! Its one of my favrites! Im gonna cry if its over! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious. I really like this story. I am sorry to see it end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story and look forward to more stories. |