|Reviews for Through it all|
| takerfan925 chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Hey,AJ,how's it?I'm here in Georgia,USA,anI am a Taker fan,hence the handle,like you couldn't figure that out, ,I held a tendre for Daveyboy m'self,His son,D.H.,Harry is doing great in the WWE now as is his niece,Natalia'Natty'Neidhart,as of now she is Women's Champion,does an impressive SharpShooter, ,sad to say,has won an lost the title that he stole from Taker,storyline was Somebody,last year put Taker in a vegetative state,ultimately it was found to be Kane,he was mad at Taker for showing mercy to HBK at their last meeting,an Bearer turned on Taker ,Mark was getting married to Michelle McCool,why,I don't know,an then he was going in for rotator cuff ,he'll be all well by Mania 27 time,would love to go but No fundage,oh well I can do the PPV thing,at for you story,Through IT ALL,I like the start to it,so we're good to 'puter is acting whonkey so PM me if ya please.
| Happygolucky103 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I love this story.
| ChicagoKnockout chapter 14 . 6/29/2008
I loved this story very much, to be honest. This is one of my favorites! :)
Regretfully, I would like to let you know (since I could not find an alternate way of contacting you by email or PM), that I'm almost positive that this story, or at least part of it has been plagiarized by another author, here, in this chapter:
This is the part I am speaking of, from the above link:
"I woke as the sun filtered through the giant French doors that led out onto Mark's balcony. As the light danced on my face, my eyes fluttered open. I eased herself out from under Mark's grasp. I wrapped a sheet around my naked form, opened the doors to the balcony and walked out into the sunshine, didn’t care if anyone saw me standing outside in nothing but sheet and this is a private property.
I gazed across the paddocks and the field to the wooded area that surrounded the property. Purple wild flowers, daisies and buttercups were everywhere, scenting the air with a lovely perfume. I sighed, this was right, this was home. This was where I belonged.
Strong arms encircled my waist and pulled me back against Mark's brad chest. I lead against him and closed my eyes. He kissed my neck and nibbled on my earlobe causing me to purr. He licked my ear and whispered, "Hungry Babe?"
"M hmm" I said.
"Okay. If you want to shower, I'll start breakfast. Sound good?" said Mark.
"Yeah” I said.
"Okay, I'll be downstairs" said Mark.
Mark kissed my neck and went downstairs. I went back into the bedroom and dropped my sheet before heading into the bathroom. I turned on the water and eased herself under the already searing heat. The water soothed my and put me completely at ease. I closed my eyes and began to day dream about Mark.
I licked my lips and allowed my hands to snake between my thighs. Before my breathing had time to become shallow, those familiar arms once again wrapped themselves around my waist. Lost in my own passion filled dream, I had failed to notice Mark as he slipped into the shower behind me.
He brought his lips down on my shoulder, nipping and licking as his hands replaced my hands on her breast and on my throbbing womanhood. A moan escaped my lips as he plunged a finger into my burning core. I bit my lip and turned to him.
"I thought you were making breakfast?" I said
"I changed my mind" said Mark as he growled seductively as he lifted me against the shower wall so I could wrap my legs around him."
When I read over this yesterday, it immediately sounded familiar to me. I didn't want to think it was plagiarism, but I checked anyway. This part of the chapter I have posted and linked sounds pratically word for word what you had written for your own chapter 14.
I am sorry to have let you know of this, in this way. But, being that this is a wonderful story, I thought I should let you know.
| Blackstar1979 chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
Mark, of course, was sporting the American Badass biker look: leather pants, vest and duster.
Now i just wanna say hubba hubba loved that look
it is the one i first remember him i started watching hi in 19
I have seen his biker clothes and wow what i would not give to have went to the show when i first started watching him. now he's me. oh yeah and good start to a story
| ashley chapter 26 . 3/6/2005
that was great. i was reading and i couldn't wait to see what was coming next.
| Insane Cali Gurl chapter 26 . 12/29/2004
I FINALLY got to read the whole story...OMG...It was so fuckin GREAT! You so need to continue writing...MORE NOW!
| Laura chapter 24 . 8/12/2004
Great Story! I was afraid Lexi or Mark was gonna die. I really hope you continue writing.
| ChicagoKnockout chapter 24 . 7/16/2004
Girl, I absolutely loved your story! You write very well, I hope that there is an update soon!
What is going to happen with Taker and Lexie?
. . .I also have my own Taker story that I just updated today, it's called "Eternal Death" if you'd like to check it out.
See you soon,
| Yuri - san chapter 24 . 6/5/2004
Like you ordered, I'm reviewing.
this is some seriously wicked shit! please continue, i have to know how it turns out!
| Insane Cali Gurl chapter 24 . 5/22/2004
Dude...Can't wait for more...PLEASE SOON!
| Latisha C chapter 24 . 5/5/2004
How sad and romantic...obviously talking about two differebt couples here. Any way good job on the story so far. Can't wait to read chapter 25 if there is even going to be a chapter 25.
| Mickeychan820 chapter 24 . 3/22/2004
OMG! You have GOT to keep writing! I love this story and I really want to see what happens next!
-The dead will rise again! Undertaker
| Princess of the Knight chapter 24 . 2/22/2004
wow that took me a while to read all 24 chappies. Wo this is good. Wow!
| Phoenix-Satori10 chapter 24 . 2/17/2004
Wow... that was a twist I wasn't expecting... now I want to know what's gonna happen to Christian and Sara's son. Hope there's more to this story soon.
| YoullNeverKnowMe chapter 23 . 2/15/2004
I just sat down and read all 23 chapters tonight. I can't wait to see what happens! Keep up the good work and update soon.