This is spectacular, the description is lovely, of course, but the sentiment of Hook being something Emma doesn't have to share or even reciprocate if she doesn't want to is wonderful. I loved every word

That was PRECIOUS!

Hehe ️ She called him ‘my pirate’ that’s honestly the cutest thing ever. I loved this story thank you!

Wonderful. No one has claimed Killian in a very long time. He must be so thrilled. In front of this Neal, too. Very nice, thanks for writing.

My.*FEELS*
So F***ing many of them.

awwwwwwwwww heeehee this is adorable omg

Oh sarcasm, how I love thee. XD

this is wonderful! pure, simple and true, their relationship, if they let it be. this is amazing

This was so beautiful. I loved the comedy at the beginning with Hook wanting Ruby to explain all the menu items. I loved the romantic and passionate moments of the end between our dear Captain Swan. You have a great mix in this one shot, and it was thoroughly enjoyed.

Awesome! I loved that you kept Emma in character, unlike so many of the fanfictions that make her all quiet and submissive. And of course Hook is just bloody brilliant!

Love it! Although I hope to see another chapter to this! Like maybe, what happens when they leave the backroom and go back to the diner where Neal is waiting and everyone else is there? :D

Captain Swan are so cute. I love this

Nawww. That was a adorable, and beautiful :)

That's really great! I love it. I can just picture the whole scene. At first when he wanted a word with her I was thinking "IS HE INSANE?! HE CAN"T BE SERIOUSLY OBJEC- Oh wait, he's kissing her. It's all good now :) "

excellent match, just perfect, all history, success and I hope you write more of them. congratulations.