Reviews for Phoenix
TashaRose chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Very nice one shot. It would be nice to see a multi-chaptered story that followed this too.
Dina C chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
You have a way of drilling right to the emotional core of a scene. Wow, that was dramatic. I got a lump in my throat during Hook's silent speech. His facial expression's during that scene certainly said all that, and more, but you put words to it. Thanks for sharing! :-)
heidi chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
excellent partner, Neal should have stayed dead, not that I like for Henri, but Emma and Hoock make a couple beautiful, congratulations.
DamonandElena4ever chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
pleeeeease continue this, I loved this as one-shot but I really wanna read more
Jj chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
This kills me! You write them so perfectly!
Matsu Meiana chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
*imagine me wailing while smashing my keyboard while The Girl is Mine is playing while I was reading this*

Sorry for being incoherent, all the feelings are drowning me.
Winter-Rae chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Brilliant! I really enjoyed this.
I could really hear the passion in this, you wrote it very well.
I am jealous of your skills. :)
Anyway! Lovely work!
Keep it up!
tersaseda chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Aaaahhhhh! Brava, Emma! So, so proud of my girl letting Hook know, feeling brave sharing because Hook had been so brave with her. Gah, I mean, aren't they just two sides of the same coin, or what?

Despite the gravitas of this one-shot, I did giggle at Hook's embarrassment to call thei kiss a 'dalliance.' And I'm glad he's lashing out a bit here at her, not because he's trying to be mean but because the man is just so close to the edge and so so raw, it would be impossible for some of that pain not to come out.

I also love how scattered his thoughts become when she tells him her secret. Excellent writing!

And her whispering as she leaves the cave...shivers.

Another superb piece!
wild Irish 7 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Wonderful story!
Jenny Bing chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
YES PERFECT. Thank you for this :)
alexandra.sarafolean chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
I'm so glad I read this...I search all this week for a second sneak peek and through your story I found it...thanks!

I so love the ending and I so hope that the producers would not end something that it's just beginning...