|Reviews for The Missing|
| ericastwilight chapter 28 . 5/26
Now that was an even better end. Seeing that glimpse into their future was perfect. Thank you so much for writing this. Now I gotta check out sgmw...maybe
| ericastwilight chapter 27 . 5/26
What a perfect thing to do. Redo moments of the past and replace with sweeter ones. A perfect ending for this lovely story. Now off to read the epilogue
| ericastwilight chapter 26 . 5/26
That was a perfect first date and dry hump, lol. Feeling comfortable in the house, and around each other will take time, but they both are ready for the long haul
| ericastwilight chapter 25 . 5/26
Poor Jasper, having to feel his despair, and finally have some relief when Bella joined him. Only for it to be taken away, to be bombarded with it all over again. So glad Japer/Edward had a chance to talk. And of course Edward and Bella, they need to do a lot of talking.
| ericastwilight chapter 24 . 5/26
I'm so glad she got a lot off her chest. He needed to hear it from her and not just his family. Poor Bella, she'd been through so much, going through the motions and not really living. Wonderful writing
| ericastwilight chapter 23 . 5/26
Aw, a reunion. Had she been cliff diving? Ugh, and Jacob is such an asshat, maybe some if what he said was true, but you don't have to rub it in her face. That will make her feel loads better. Love Emmett.
| ericastwilight chapter 22 . 5/26
His journal writing was perfect. Such emotions in those written words. I'm glad Bella can't go out and say everything is fine, not when she was so hurt by what happened. Can't wait for more.
| jk chapter 21 . 5/13
he left her and shes all...no worries! I love you! come back to me! what a weak little clingy bitch I bet he could cheat on her and she'd say oh that's ok as long as you still love me! I know im not very its ok!
| jk chapter 20 . 5/13
he said that everything he went through for months was a hallucination but it wasn't months...he wallowed in the attic which was true...then he visions up going to forks...he wasn't there for months!
and why hasn't he fed in months in his families been there? oh that's right they said t was 2/7 and theyd been there for days right since 1/28 and they hant force fed him? I don't believe tht for a moment that would have been the first thing they did! and where in the fuck is this attic? alice meddles in everything why didn't she know where he was? surly she saw him travel to this attic
| jk chapter 19 . 5/13
what the fuck is going on? they found bella in a cave and there were unknown vampires there...burning bodies...but it just so happens that bella is the only one alive...convienant...don't ya think? a weird version of Edward was there...bt not really...but maybe...and then bellas in a room with Edward for a week talking about how broken she is and how much she loves him...he bit her then was surprised that the blood was real? what a fucking moron
| jk chapter 18 . 5/13
so what bella sat back and watched as a vampire what...killed the entire town and the wolves..you' think she would have killed herself...your life isn't worth all of thiers bella!
.I think its so incredibly stupid that they didn't go to la push for info by the way...well they might not be forthcoming...um who gives a shit...Edward reads minds! and a whole town is missing! that was really stupid you shouldn't have put that in here cause like I said..it just made them all look stupid
| jk chapter 13 . 5/13
12 chapters and all that's happened is...not much!
Edward wallows on the floor of attic
Edward eats a rat
Edward invisions a phone call
gets on a place to seattle, rents a car goes to forks
no ones there
his family comes
that's it? in 12 chapters?/ and you think this is a good story?
| jk chapter 12 . 5/13
why would they look for survivors? they don't know what happened maybe they just left cause forks sucks... in that case there would be nothing to "survive" get it? theres no bodys no blood ect ect so why would they look for "survivors"
| jk chapter 11 . 5/13
does Edward do anything but whine? you gave us the date but how long was it? he left her and went into some attic and wallowed? for how long?!
| jk chapter 6 . 5/13
so bella wasn't missing? Edward was in attic...where? and just laying there rotting away why?