Reviews for Hero of the Everyman |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unless not having an aura actually is some kind of counter for apparent godhood and the mental invasion is his trying to stop a confrontation from happening, I think the antagonist has been made up to that point where he needs to be beaten in a manner so convoluted the audience cannot tell it's bullshit. Like Voldemort. Or they could all die. That's also believable by this point. Either way, romance like this is of a rare quality. This fic singlehandedly made WeissxJaune my OTP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Well, it was a pretty damn fun journey while it lasted. Let's hope this gets the sendoff it deserves! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that is a very ... nice?/ effective villain, not much in the way of character but that's fine. Happy that the whole "he is in my head" thing was nt ignored until after it was too late. Also Human characters! Yay, no mary sues here P. Love this story and cant wait for the next chapter. But i am curious about what fic inspired you to finish this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sjicnqjxojqjcjs I love this so muchhhhh3 but whyyyy T-T why twoooo nooooo keep goinggggg T-T |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you let Jaune or Weiss die when fight the fire-eyed turd, as I have dubbed him, I will hunt you down, tie you up and RANT UNTIL YOUR EARS BLEED! THE FLUFF CANNOT END, I WON'T ACCEPT IT! *sigh*I don't want this fic to end, it's too good to stop! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, this was an suspenseful chapter . Two? Does that mean you're ending the story? If so I only wish that you make it good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, and I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() so is this story dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sweet... My playlist happened to be playing a soft, slow piece with Piano, it was wonderful. |
![]() ![]() Fuuuuuuck...Jaune is infinitely more badass than his canon counterpart, but he's also so much more vulnerable! ughhhh...damn it Jaune, use your heroic resolve and forcefully burn out your life force to achieve Legendary Badass Powers of Gods to deliver Sweet Creamy Justice and piss your name in the annals of history as the greatest warrior in remnant to ever live already goshdamn it. THIS CHAPTER HAS MY BLOOD BOILINGGGG... MY SOUL IS BURNING WITH A THIRST FOR GAR AHHHHHHHHH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo... The Mistress of Dust with the Guy with no Aura? Interesting. |
![]() ![]() I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow amazing completely amazing I found this story and for the next two days it's all I read in my free time I couldnt put my phone down. I wish I had found it sooner so I could thank you after each well written chapter. Your writing is too notch and you really keep the personalities of the characters to match the series. Can't wait to read more plz continue this great story |