Reviews for Hero of the Everyman |
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![]() ![]() ![]() BLOOD FOR THE SANDWICH GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SPAGHETTI LORDS! |
![]() ![]() This is perhaps one of my favorite fics on this site to date and I only just finnished the first chapter. |
![]() ![]() long live white knight |
![]() ![]() good love you |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol loved it, but you did leave out what exactly happened to arc family, and why Jaune lost his aura fully to Slade... so there is that |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm you got Jaune's actual semblance right and what did happen to his family? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reached the end (story was wrapped up nicely) and ahh the feels... Russell was cool in this story, Kia was my favourite OC, Payne and Jonas were well written OCs, Pyrrha playing wingwoman was new, and of course Weiss remains my favourite character in RWBY. Still wished for that last reunion scene with Kia and Jaune while Weiss is also with him though... Regardless, the villain was good, as was Cardin, and all in all a good read, kudos to you for going back to this fic and editing in 2016 (this fic deserves more attention) and I can only hope that you will make more Weiss/Jaune stories in future :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jaune and Kia's friendship still as cute as ever, hoping to see the two of then reunite in person at some point along with Slade. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most intense food fight scene description ever read, definitely amusing and well done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() just finished this story amazing read, can't believe I never read this earlier, but I'm glad I got to read it know. loved the story and thanks for the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing from start to finish. Having lots off perspectives from outside the main characters, and actually fleshing them out really well, was such a great decision. Your huge level of detail is definitely your greatest strength, followed closely by your creativity. Love love loved the story, can't wait to read more of your works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I notice this story tends to act as though the reader should already know things that happened and aren't mentioned, rather jarring amounts of skipping in and out of flashbacks without warning. Despite that though it was a rather charming read. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooo, or is this an au where Weiss failed to beat the knight from here teaser trailer, resulting in self esteem issues~ Thus less pride and arrogance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Especially since her last name hasn't been mentioned unless I missed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, judging by how Weiss isn't... how she starts, either ooc or she got disowned and is humbler now. Let's find out~ |