Reviews for Hero of the Everyman
titen anwolf chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Amazing chapter please continue and make a story out of it
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Keep going dude
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Moar Plz, that is all
Thehappyvampire chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Please do continue this fic.
Regent Septimus chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Please keep going; my interest has piqued and this is just a taster of what I'm sure you can come up with.
Hope to see more from you!
SimplySutton chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Great chapter! How could you even think about making it a one-shot?! Make it a full story, if the rest of it's as good as the first chapter, I'm staying until the last page! Really like the idea of a Jaune/Weiss pairing and I think you're doing a great job at it. Awesome work, and keep writing pleeaasee!
Admiral.Warygrun chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Amazing story so far. I love the way you show how Jaune interacts with the characters. I love the parts with slade and especially kia, is there a possibility we will see more of her? She seems as a little sister/ best-girlfriend to Jaune. The way you give Jaune his backstory is marvelous, the way it is presented is better here than in most fics I read. From what I see this is going to be an amazing storyline that'll have me waiting everytime I am not on the internet. Please update soon.

P.S: Your grammer and spelling is perfect no errors.
AnInterestedThirdParty chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic. I hope you update again soon!
Rusty Shacklefor chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Where's my god damn rocket locker scene?!
Dragon Noire chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Very well done. I would recommend that you keep going as it is a very good story.
YARNfics chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
keep going this is freaking fantastic
NARUTOfan876 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
I would like you to keep going please
Pickle the chicken chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Man, that was good. I don't really understand the M rating though. Implied almost character death? I don't know, better safe than sorry anyway.

SnowyFox417 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Wonderful story! I'm starting to enjoy fics where Jaune is shown to be much more than the lovable coward he is in the canon (even if that trait is featured earlier than it is in the actual episodes). It also opens up windows for new interactions we have yet to see in RWBY, such as Ren and Blake, Nora and Yang, Pyrrha and Weiss, and possibly others. If you're able to keep going, I think you should do so. It seems very promising should you choose to do it. :3
Fanfiction108 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Awsome start. Good detail and everything. Please keep going!
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