Reviews for Hero of the Everyman |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this Jaune. Your interpretation of Weiss also pleases me. I especially liked how you had Jaune naturally protect Weiss. Despite being somewhat cliche, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy when he does those things and Weiss gets embarrassed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() everything up to this point has been written wonderfully, and there's still so much left to read! woo |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice save, Jaune! you earned that sandwich oh and the whole climbing back into consciousness thing? that was brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is getting intense |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit... R.I.P. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() professor port getting in on pancake day lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so amazingly different from the other stories in this community, love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is it the ocs are always overpowered |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yassssss |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not gonna lie but I'm a little disappointed you turned cardin into the stalker rapist...but hey it's your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously where is ozpin in this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well cardin went the bad guy road ...you'd think that if ozpin knew of jaune he'd also known how broken cardin is |
![]() ![]() ![]() More stories please |