Reviews for Hero of the Everyman
notYacob chapter 2 . 10/14/2016
I like this Jaune. Your interpretation of Weiss also pleases me. I especially liked how you had Jaune naturally protect Weiss. Despite being somewhat cliche, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy when he does those things and Weiss gets embarrassed.
sb0 chapter 11 . 10/10/2016
everything up to this point has been written wonderfully, and there's still so much left to read! woo
sb0 chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
nice save, Jaune! you earned that sandwich oh and the whole climbing back into consciousness thing? that was brilliant
sb0 chapter 9 . 10/10/2016
this is getting intense
sb0 chapter 8 . 10/6/2016
holy shit... R.I.P.
sb0 chapter 7 . 10/4/2016
beautiful
sb0 chapter 5 . 10/3/2016
professor port getting in on pancake day lol
sb0 chapter 4 . 10/3/2016
such a good chapter
sb0 chapter 3 . 10/2/2016
this is so amazingly different from the other stories in this community, love it
loganhunter2 chapter 18 . 9/4/2016
Why is it the ocs are always overpowered
loganhunter2 chapter 11 . 9/1/2016
Yassssss
loganhunter2 chapter 10 . 9/1/2016
I'm not gonna lie but I'm a little disappointed you turned cardin into the stalker rapist...but hey it's your story
loganhunter2 chapter 9 . 9/1/2016
Seriously where is ozpin in this
loganhunter2 chapter 8 . 9/1/2016
Well cardin went the bad guy road ...you'd think that if ozpin knew of jaune he'd also known how broken cardin is
loganhunter2 chapter 7 . 9/1/2016
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